It good imagery and message. Though, I think this is a song. It's structure doesn't flow much.
What is this life worth
When all you ever get is pain
There has to be some reason that I’m here.
It's a bit too short and if this is going to be played... I don't know, like you said, "musical"? I don't think it would even last a minute.
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