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I'm glad you wrote this work.
I'm glad you gave it the title you did, because it explains the basis of your writing! XD
And you're acknowledging it. Hee hee.
The blood is back! Did it ever stop? XD
I think nature and science actually play a big part in your works and that's interesting, because it's a dynamic I had failed to notice before, either that, or it wasn't present in some of your later works.
Either way, it's an interesting dimension to add to this piece.
Kudos.
Howdy ☺
I’m going to review your work!
Such needs a capital ‘s’.
Towards needs a capital ‘t’.
Once needs a capital ‘o’.
Such needs a capital ‘s’.
Apart from some small capitalisation erros this is a very effective poem. It’s one of my favourites that I have read on this site to be honest.
Keep writing. ☺