Wow. This was a really nice read. These are just one of those pieces that you read that you can definitely relate to. Or at least for me it is.
" Don't be surprised if there is no one here to save you
You gotta learn now how to save yourself"
"Don't be surprised if there is no one here to save you
You gotta learn now how to change yourself"
This quote reminds me of myself giving me pep-talks because i was so out of it at a certain period of time and i just needed someone to be there. Unfortunately, there was no one but someone how i managed to get myself through.
I always felt like the unlucky person. Then started to change my mind set and everything really started looking up for me. I guess you attract what you think about or you become what you think about. The mind really knows how to mess people up sometimes.
"One day it's gonna be a train wreck
The next day it's more than a broken neck"
The way you started the poem off really hooked me in. The rhyme and it actually making sense i guess is what hooked me. I dunno, i just liked it.
Anyhow, great write and well done.
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