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Very good poem. It's very true that the light holds all our fear. Sorry I can't really give you any spelling help if there is a word misspelled I can't spell to save my life haha. And i wish you used more metaphors to bring me in to the story of the poem. Overall it is a very good poem. Keep on writing.
(Sorry this took so long I read it then I got distracted)
Thank you! I do think I you're kind of right about using more metaphors. Hehe! Thank you once again for coming by.