Ice and snow what a strong combination, I love it, to bad that it was so short, ''Melted like ice'' is my favorite line from this one. And ''The tears that fell'' fits beautiful together, that line makes the poem complete.
Another fantastic line is ''heart and haven'' and it is great for a last line. The first line let me think of Snow White, haha, so I love it. And how you written ''Frozen tears decorated her cheeks'', so powerful and filled with a lot of beauty.
You are a great Poet that let me want to write again, so I stop with this review and go write a poem too, hopefully was this helpful?
Have a great day/afternoon/evening,
Dazzle.
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