DEAR LOWERCASE,
LOWERCASE LETTERS ARE LOWER-CLASS
LETTERS.
TRY THE UPPER-CLASS LIFE, I MEAN UPPERCASE.
ACTUALLY I LIED, UPPER-CLASS IS ALWAYS RIGHT.
USE YOUR OUTSIDE VOICE FOR ONCE,
IT'S A SHAME YOU CAN'T.
YOURS SINCERELY, THE CAPITALIST.
dear uppercase,
i get my point across without using capital letters.
that's not always the case!
at least i have an inside voice, you only exist
with a caps lock or shift button.
yours sincerely, lowercase.
Dear Uppercase and Lowercase,
We should type in harmony on the keyboard.
Every letter is beautiful, in its own case.
Yours sincerely, Middle-Case.
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Hey! Nica here to give you a review
This is seriously the funniest poem I've read in a long, long time. Just the idea of a drama between the keys on my keyboard cracks me up. Okay, down to business. 
I don't really understand the first line. It doesn't seem to fit into the rest of the piece. Maybe he meant that he was right in referring to himself as the Upper-Class?
This was mean sarcasm at its best. Love it!!!!
You should totally write another one like this.
Hee hee.
Only you could come up with an experimental work like this! XD
I am impressed. I like the way the two types of letters have been personified here.
You have a very extensive imagination and it makes for good (especially entertaining) reading.
My favourite part was this:
'We should type in harmony on the keyboard.' And your whole introduction of "Middle-Case"
It almost seems like you are addressing the class issue here, as if there is a doubt entendre behind the work. (I suspect there might be.)
And that is a very clever thing to do.
Can't fault this work on punctuation and grammar though... or your use of capitalisation! XD
Lulz.
Interesting work. Keep writing
~BSF
Thanks, much appreciated.
Ooh, what a clever and humorous poem that comes out with a meaningful message!
I enjoyed reading such a cute poem
I thin the only thing i didn't understand was :
"TRY THE UPPER-CLASS LIFE, I MEAN UPPERCASE." Why not keep it one word instead of two? The Upper is repetitive, but maybe that's how you intended it to be. Keep it smooth.
Poetry is so much harder to review because each letter is always intended, unless one finds it not to be and then is able to review it!
I hope you keep writing poetry and continue to progress
Thanks for reviewing
Haha, this is extremely clever! Although I am not that fond of poems, I have to say that this is good. I have no corrections to give, but it might take a sharper eye to do so. I enjoyed this one, I really did. I'll be looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work!