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Todd sat slouched over on his bed. The weather outside seemed especially dismal, and couldn’t have been helping the rescue efforts. His eyes were glazed over and he reached up to wipe the sweat from his wrinkled brow. What now? Todd’s thoughts were travelling as slow as honey and he struggled to make himself do anything. His frozen mind was caught up in something. What is it? What am I missing? He wearily picked up his hand and traced its crinkled lines with his fingernail. He was young and yet his hands were already as creased as an old man’s. What was it that his dad had told him? “Your hands tell you if you have worked hard in life. If they are as creased and calloused as a mountain range, then you done good. But, if they are soft like butter, well you better get to work.” Todd snorted in amusement as he remembered the other little sayings of his dad. “Do what makes you happy. If you aren’t happy, change your situation because, after all, isn’t that what life’s about. To make you happy?” His eyebrows joined together and arched slightly. His upper lip raised in disgust. Selfish old man.
Okayyy....right off the bat it looks like we've got ourselves a situation in which you've somehow accidentally split this one large paragraph into random smaller parts right in the middle of sentences, which I assume is probably some form of glitch because if this is intentional, well, this is not very good paragraphing there, you definitely do not want to go around breaking paragraphs in the middle of sentences there.
Anyways, moving past that little detail for now, let's get right to the content of the story here. And well, that appears to be of a person that's going through a bit of a tough spot in life there, we've got a sense of general disappointment and sadness radiating off this character here and it looks like they're remembering advice from an estranged father that they aren't the biggest fan of as well here. All in all, it looks to be a general sense of sadness here at the start of this story.
Yet, I still love him. Todd decided what had to be done and decisively planted his feet on the floor. If God gave me grace, then I guess he deserves it to.
And well, it ends on a surprisingly happy note there, it appears someone that is accepting that they need to forgive this father..and move on...well, interesting note to end, and a pretty nice message too. At any rate, this seems like its part of a pretty interesting story here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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