Hey! ajruby here to review!
This was another wonderful poem! I liked what you're saying with this piece but in a couple places, it seems just a little awkward. Maybe it's just me though.
Anyway, I really, really liked reading this poem! It had a lot of imagery and you did an excellent job in describing a picture. The word choices were good (I love speaking in "Old English") even though I didn't understand a couple words. But again, great job on this all together! Keep writing and Happy Review Day(s)!
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