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My name is Quest, and I will be reviewing this short work for you today, both to get it out of the Green Room and just in time for Review Day! So let's get onto the review portion of this review! I'm afraid this review will not be as long as some of my others, since the piece I am reviewing is so short, but here we go anyway, right? Right!
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So, first off, this matches the title of this piece. I don't know if that was coincidental, or if you just wanted to do that. If you wanted to do that, then you did a very good job at making them the same. It is hard to do that, especially in short pieces like this, yet you did it realistically, without losing that deep meanin that you have in it.
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So, onto the actual structure of the piece. I think you should have put a period at the end and capitalized it at the beginning, just to make it look more professional, although that's nitpicky stuff, and it's just my opinion. You can truly just keep it like that, and it would be fine. Either way, it's your choice.
I have to say, this is a great and very high quality piece, from the very beginning to the very, reluctant end. I do hope you write more like this! It is extremely well written, well paced, and the theme is great, with nothing straying from it.
I hope this helps you, even if a little,
Quest
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