Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

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Sins
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Wed Jun 30, 2010 4:51 pm
Sins says... · Wed Jun 30, 2010 4:51 pm
All done. 8)

Anyone else want some of my awesomeness...?
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HorseradishCares
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Wed Jun 30, 2010 5:12 pm
HorseradishCares says... · Wed Jun 30, 2010 5:12 pm
I would, pwease?
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It's a poem, haha, if you wanted to know...
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ultraviolet
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Wed Jun 30, 2010 5:24 pm
ultraviolet says... · Wed Jun 30, 2010 5:24 pm
I was wondering if you could review this poem for me. Please and thank you. :) Cerberus - Hell's Guard
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Sins
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Wed Jun 30, 2010 8:40 pm
Sins says... · Wed Jun 30, 2010 8:40 pm
Doneeeee 8)

Next please...?
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Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:47 am
Elinor says... · Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:47 am
Hi!

Cabin in Mid-Summer

It's in Narrative Poetry. :) Thanks Skins!

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Sins
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Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:31 pm
Sins says... · Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:31 pm
All done Eli 8)

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ToritheMonster
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Fri Jul 02, 2010 10:20 am
ToritheMonster says... · Fri Jul 02, 2010 10:20 am
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Black and Blue, Chapter 2, pleaseeey.

If you'd like to read/review chapter 1, here's a link to that as well

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MiaParamore
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Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:35 pm
MiaParamore says... · Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:35 pm
Hey! Would you mind reviewing my Science Fiction short story? Here is the link: A Chilly Farm
Thanks in advance!

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Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:24 pm
Sins says... · Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:24 pm
All done, guysssss. 8)

Next please! Xd
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ArcticMonkey
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Fri Jul 02, 2010 7:26 pm
ArcticMonkey says... · Fri Jul 02, 2010 7:26 pm
Hiya Skins!!!!
Could you review a poem for me? It's my first one since I was like 7 so please critique (be nice, although I know you will!) post732517.html#p732517
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Sins
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Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:38 am
Sins says... · Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:38 am
All done tam :pirate3:

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Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:47 am
razzleberryx says... · Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:47 am
Hey! I only have one post up right now, but you should review it :) It's the first poem I've written in a while, so all critique is very much welcome.
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Thanks!
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Sins
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Mon Jul 05, 2010 9:34 am
Sins says... · Mon Jul 05, 2010 9:34 am
Done. 8)

Next...?
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Mr.Knightley
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Mon Jul 05, 2010 10:46 pm
Mr.Knightley says... · Mon Jul 05, 2010 10:46 pm
Because that last review you gave me completely sucked: topic66499.html

Hopefully I took your advice correctly :P (and it was great advice, by the way!)

Thanks in advance. *sniff* Just thought I'd give you a chance to redeem yourself.
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hero
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Tue Jul 06, 2010 5:49 am
hero says... · Tue Jul 06, 2010 5:49 am
Hey, Skins! I wrote up some lyrics (as in song lyrics), and I'm hoping to get some more opinions all around. If you could review it for me, that would be lovely. *pretty please?*

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic66474.html

Song Title: Fantasy
This guy is so evil you could put him in between two slices of bread and call him an evil sandwich.

Coming at you like a jetpack Shakespeare.

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