Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

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Puffycherry
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Sun Jun 20, 2010 10:36 am
Puffycherry says... · Sun Jun 20, 2010 10:36 am
Hello,

I am currently writing a new fantasy novel and would truly appreciate if you'd review the first chapter.

Information:

Genre: Fantasy
Title: Ecole des Monstres
Link: post724784.html#p724784

Thanks, in advance.
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ArcticMonkey
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Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:36 pm
ArcticMonkey says... · Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:36 pm
Heya Skins!
Can your read this? I'm not expecting a critique (you can if you want to) I just want more poeple to read it! http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=65553
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Sins
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Sun Jun 20, 2010 7:01 pm
Sins says... · Sun Jun 20, 2010 7:01 pm
All done guys!

Anyone else...? :)
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Flower~Child
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Tue Jun 22, 2010 4:34 am
Flower~Child says... · Tue Jun 22, 2010 4:34 am
Will you review part five of my story?

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My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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Sins
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Tue Jun 22, 2010 5:34 pm
Sins says... · Tue Jun 22, 2010 5:34 pm
All done, Flower! 8)

Next...?
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Sins
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Wed Jun 23, 2010 4:21 pm
Sins says... · Wed Jun 23, 2010 4:21 pm
Done, F1shes! :D

Anyone else fancy a review...?
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Sins
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Mon Jun 28, 2010 4:28 pm
Sins says... · Mon Jun 28, 2010 4:28 pm
Come on, guys. I'm lonely. D:

I want to get to 350 reviews, and so far, I am lacking. :|
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Tue Jun 29, 2010 2:27 am
Twit says... · Tue Jun 29, 2010 2:27 am
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This is Historical Fantasy, so I hope you don't mind too much? :)
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Sins
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Tue Jun 29, 2010 8:24 pm
Sins says... · Tue Jun 29, 2010 8:24 pm
All doneeeee, guys. 8)

Next...?
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Tue Jun 29, 2010 8:31 pm
austenite says... · Tue Jun 29, 2010 8:31 pm
Moi? post730796.html#p730796 Thank you!!
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Sins
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Tue Jun 29, 2010 9:17 pm
Sins says... · Tue Jun 29, 2010 9:17 pm
Done! 8)

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Mr.Knightley
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Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:57 pm
Mr.Knightley says... · Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:57 pm
I'm not posting here because your reviews are far better than mine, or anything. Psh. NO WAY. Actually, I feel bad for you, and I think you need something to do, so:

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Hmph. Get to it, missy. You've been lax lately. : |
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lilymoore
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Wed Jun 30, 2010 4:22 am
lilymoore says... · Wed Jun 30, 2010 4:22 am
Okay, last person I'll beg.

Please review this pleease!

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And thank you!
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