If you'd like, I'd love to have you review my story! It's Romantic Fiction and was recently moved to novels, though I've split it up into short stories as I've posted it.
The link to the first part of chapter one is in my signature. If you like it, it is part of a novel and you could follow the first page to the remaining chapters. No pressure, though.
Thanks so much! Carly
My laughter is of musical melodies. My screams are of blood. -Carly
hi thanks for the reveiw it was really helpful and i tried to fix up the stuff you pointed out could you please reveiw the next chapter? post692761.html#p692761 -fighta
I'll get on to the rest of them A.S.A.P! No more requests until I finish these three though, please guys. I've had loads of review request lately, including PM's. I want to make sure I can give everyone a decent review.
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
hey Skins (again). This review is not for my brother (twin) or a cousin... It's for me. I'm going to be completetly selfish for a change.... Now this review is on the story (by me) name: After Adonis genre: romantic fiction (its more romance/fantasy but who cares??)
Thanks sooo much!!
CHOW FOR NOW, sionarama
p.s.
I think I've become a regular here!! <3
"You may not be educated well in the areas of etiquette and the like as a princess, but you do throw some bashing good parties!" Not all princesses are pink sparkles. Exhibit A
I'm like a PUMA, just without the black fur, yellow eyes, paws, tail, claws, pointy ears and sharp teeth. Plus, I can't bend over and lick my- never mind.
Hi Skins! Could you do me a massive favour and review the first chapter of my novel? Pretty please? It's called Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons. And possibly maybe the second chapter...? Thank you so much! ~Emma
Your = Possession. Your shoes are so sweet! You're = Omission. You're quite strange...
If you are confused about which to put, simply say in your mind "you are" and see if that fits the sentence. If not, you are looking for your.
