I could use some no nonsense feedback. Anything you notice would really help. If you'd like me to critique something of yours in return, you should send me a link, I'd be happy to!
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Hi. I was wondering if you would give me your opinion on the prologue of my book, "When the Sky Bleeds". It is an action/paranormal romance, but the prologue sets everything up, so it is a bit longer and more bland than the usual prologue. Hope you don't mind.
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can you review this for me...It's a story for a contest and its deadline is coming soon....
Thanks!
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police. Tony: You won't hurt me. John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not? Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen. John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me
May you never steal, lie, or cheat. But if you must steal, then steal away my sorrows. And if you must lie, then lie with me all the nights of your life. And if you must cheat, then please, cheat death. — An Unknown Bride, Leap Year
