You Know You Want Some [re-opened]

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Hey Demeter!

Can you take a look at Medusa for me? It's in other fiction.

All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them.

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Hey Dems! >=D

Review mah essay, pleassseee? topic61482.html

*tosses more chocolate*
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*bump*

And, if you've posted in this thread, and I still haven't reviewed your work for some reason, just nudge me and I will!
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Demmehlicious! *noms*

So, I was wondering if you wouldn't mind taking a look at this:

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It's non-linear, so you don't need to read the previous chapters. I asked Arieda too but I'm fairly sure her quota of three is already filled and it was more of a note for future reference, so if you could look at it, twould be appreciated.

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'Kay Demseh!

Since you'd like something, I hope you don;t mind this: Frozen Rose
Oh and it's Romantic Fiction.
Thankies. :)
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Please make me review!

And Lava, I trust you'll send me the link to the edited version when you've posted it, like you said. :)
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Hello Dems. Mind reviewing this poem for me? It's for Rosey's contest, so be as harsh as possible. :P

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Can you please Review: Baby, I love you
Its poetry
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Hello,

I am currently writing a new fantasy novel and would truly appreciate if you'd review the first chapter.

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Genre: Fantasy
Title: Ecole des Monstres
Link: post724784.html#p724784

Thanks, in advance.
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Hey would you take a look at this poem I wrote? Please and thank you.




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Hello friend! Will you review part 5 of my romantic fiction?

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My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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Here's looking at you, kids.
"Your jokes are scarier than your earrings." -Twit

"14. Pretend like you would want him even if he wasn't a prince. (Yeah, right.)" -How to Make a Guy Like You - Disney Princess Style

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Hi, Demeter! Can you help Kaka and I here? :P That's okay, right?

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thank you! :D
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HI!

Right, here is your chocolate XD, and, YOU CAN WRITE WITH IT TOO :D

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*bribery finnished*

I'd really apreciate it if you could review this viewtopic.php?t=78580 for me, it's in other.
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Okay... You are going to madly, madly hate me for this, but...

Would you mind reviewing something for me that's a) really long, and b) has a billion comments already? It's just that I've recently edited the first chapter of my current novel, and want to get some fresh eyes on it. Here's the link: viewtopic.php?t=72983 It's general fiction, by the way.

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I don't think I've gotten a review from you since I was an embarrassing little noob, so I thought I'd ask you. I used to, like, stalk you back then, I think... xD Sorry for that.

EDIT: Oh, and here's your chocolate:

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It's OBAMA! In chocolate form! He's so hot.
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