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PenNPaper
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Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:56 am
PenNPaper says... · Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:56 am
Hi Evi wondering if you could review this for me.
It's called Saving Zanica and it's under Science-fiction.
topic56438.html
Writing is all about imagination~




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Evi
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Tue Jan 05, 2010 11:23 pm
Evi says... · Tue Jan 05, 2010 11:23 pm
Done, PNP!
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.




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Demeter
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Thu Jan 07, 2010 1:52 pm
Demeter says... · Thu Jan 07, 2010 1:52 pm
Evi love! How about this:

-shire, in Other Poetry?

Just tell me if you need anything reviewed in exchange. :)


Demeter
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Jiggity
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Sun Jan 10, 2010 3:33 am
Jiggity says... · Sun Jan 10, 2010 3:33 am
*pokes head in* This place seems popular.

You should review mah stawry. Maharaj the Magician It's chapter two but you don't exactly need to read the first bit to understand it or anything. :)

Twould be appreciated.
Mah name is jiggleh. And I like to jiggle.

"Indecision and terror, thy name is novel." - Chiko




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Angels-Symphony
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Sun Jan 10, 2010 11:07 pm
Angels-Symphony says... · Sun Jan 10, 2010 11:07 pm
Today She Dreams

:D

-Shina
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.




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Evi
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Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:12 pm
Evi says... · Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:12 pm
*poof!*
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.




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Rascalover
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Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:59 am
Rascalover says... · Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:59 am
Can you please review a chapter from my romantic fiction piece

topic58540.html

Tiffany,
Points are rewarded :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html




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BenFranks
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Wed Feb 10, 2010 8:14 pm
BenFranks says... · Wed Feb 10, 2010 8:14 pm
Hey Evi!

I see you don't really review non-fiction so feel free to pass on this if you like! :)
It's a column-based extract from my book. (Hoping to get published! xD

The Art Of Math & Ladybird Eating topic58584.html
(More alternative kind of comedy)

Could it be more ridiculous? topic57694.html
(More satirical & sarcastic comedy)

Thanks,
Ben




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antimelrose
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Sat Feb 20, 2010 4:08 am
antimelrose says... · Sat Feb 20, 2010 4:08 am
Hello Evi! Could you please review my poem, "Bird of Recess"? It's in the Other Poetry section.

topic59114.html

Thank you!

–antimelrose
Sabbatical isn't the right word, but it almost is.
loves like a hurricane/i am a tree/bending the weight of his wind and mercy/dcb
grace finds beauty in everything... makes beauty out of ugly things/U2




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Evi
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Wed Apr 07, 2010 1:37 am
Evi says... · Wed Apr 07, 2010 1:37 am
*poof!*
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.




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MiaParamore
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Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:56 am
MiaParamore says... · Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:56 am
Can you review this?
I know its much so I won't feel bad if you turn it down.
A Criminal's Heart-Prologue
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-2
A criminal's heart chapter-3
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




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SophieSays
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Sun Apr 11, 2010 9:45 am
SophieSays says... · Sun Apr 11, 2010 9:45 am
Hello.
Please will you review the first part of my short story? It's called 'The Man In the Top Hat/Emilie's Diary - Part One' and you can find it here: post687280.html
If you would like me to review something of yours in return let me know!
Thanks in advance,
Sophie
If you would like a review, please visit my review shop: topic61400.html :)




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emmylou1995
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Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:32 pm
emmylou1995 says... · Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:32 pm
Hi, Evi. Would you please reveiw the prologue and first chapter of my book? I really want to know if they are good.

Links:
Prologue- topic60846.html
First chapter- topic61776.html

Thanks alot! If you want me to review something of yours in return, just PM me. I Love PM's!
When all you have is nothing, there is alot to go around.




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Sins
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Mon Apr 12, 2010 9:23 pm
Sins says... · Mon Apr 12, 2010 9:23 pm
Hey Evi :)

Could you review this for me please?
It's a random chapter,of my fantasy fiction. Is that okay?

Thanks,

xoxo Skins
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.




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Evi
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Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:03 pm
Evi says... · Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:03 pm
Done, done, done, and done!
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.



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