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peanut19
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Wed Jun 23, 2010 12:19 pm
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Wed Jun 23, 2010 12:19 pm
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Evi, I love you! Review for me!
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Thank you, Evil
~peanut~
There is a light in you, a Vision in the making with sorrow enough to extinguish the stars. I can help you.
~And The Light Fades
The people down here are our zombies, who should be dead or not exist but do.
~Away From What We Started
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Evi
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Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:17 pm
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Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:17 pm
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So, I'm back from vacation and open for business again!
*poof!*
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
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Sat Jul 17, 2010 10:02 pm
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Sat Jul 17, 2010 10:02 pm
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Could you review this for me? Muchas gracias.
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If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.
-Mary Oliver
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Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:29 am
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Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:29 am
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Mind checking this poem out? Feel free to tear it apart, I'm trying to see if it's got potential. Thanks in advance!
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If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.
-Mary Oliver
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Tue Aug 09, 2011 5:43 pm
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Tue Aug 09, 2011 5:43 pm
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So yeah. This has been dead for eons, but I'm trying to review again, so come at me, people! Taking any prose or poetry requests.
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
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Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:29 pm
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Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:29 pm
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Link:
Lady No Soul (2)
Ooo lookit that, I did a hyperlinky.
Genre: Fantasy/crazy alternate history
My cool hyperlinky is to Chapter 2, but you don't need to read or review Chapter 1 if you don't want to--it's just that Chapter 2 is a wee bit bare.
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this. We have you." -Abed Nadir
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Sun Aug 21, 2011 8:02 pm
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Sun Aug 21, 2011 8:02 pm
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Tenyo
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Mon Aug 22, 2011 9:10 am
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Mon Aug 22, 2011 9:10 am
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Hey Evi!
Could you possibly review this for me? =D
It's chapter two of my novel "Kaeru."
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Tue Aug 30, 2011 3:59 pm
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Tue Aug 30, 2011 3:59 pm
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Hello!
Link:
topic86855.html
Genre: Um, general, I think? Kind of no-genre.
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this. We have you." -Abed Nadir
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Wed Aug 31, 2011 3:44 am
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Wed Aug 31, 2011 3:44 am
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Sins
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Thu Sep 01, 2011 11:06 am
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Thu Sep 01, 2011 11:06 am
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When you're free, could you check out this for me? (I totally didn't rhyme on purpose then.)
topic86779.html
It's a Fantasy short story. It's a bit all over the place now because I wasn't that serious about it, but I've decided to try and fix it up a bit, so I could do with your help!
Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
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Sat Sep 03, 2011 5:42 pm
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Sat Sep 03, 2011 5:42 pm
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Hey there Evi,
If you don't mind I'd love an overall opinion on this if you can. It's awfully short, so hopefully it wouldn't take you too long.
Here's the link:
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Thank you!
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Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:21 am
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Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:21 am
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Yay, popularity! I will definitely take these last requests. But any new ones might want to hold on for a while-- getting a little busy.
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
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Sun Sep 18, 2011 9:16 am
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Sun Sep 18, 2011 9:16 am
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Whenever you have the time for a poem, it'd be greatly appreciated
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