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Evi, I love you! Review for me! topic65767.html

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So, I'm back from vacation and open for business again!

*poof!*
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.




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Could you review this for me? Muchas gracias. :smt003

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Mind checking this poem out? Feel free to tear it apart, I'm trying to see if it's got potential. Thanks in advance!

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So yeah. This has been dead for eons, but I'm trying to review again, so come at me, people! Taking any prose or poetry requests.
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Link: Lady No Soul (2)

Ooo lookit that, I did a hyperlinky.

Genre: Fantasy/crazy alternate history

My cool hyperlinky is to Chapter 2, but you don't need to read or review Chapter 1 if you don't want to--it's just that Chapter 2 is a wee bit bare.
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Hey Evi!

Could you possibly review this for me? =D

It's chapter two of my novel "Kaeru."

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Hello!

Link: topic86855.html
Genre: Um, general, I think? Kind of no-genre.
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When you're free, could you check out this for me? (I totally didn't rhyme on purpose then.)

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It's a Fantasy short story. It's a bit all over the place now because I wasn't that serious about it, but I've decided to try and fix it up a bit, so I could do with your help!

Please and thank you!
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Hey there Evi,

If you don't mind I'd love an overall opinion on this if you can. It's awfully short, so hopefully it wouldn't take you too long.

Here's the link:
- viewtopic.php?t=86924

Thank you!
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Yay, popularity! I will definitely take these last requests. But any new ones might want to hold on for a while-- getting a little busy. ;)
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