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Done, no line! ^_^
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.




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Here's the first chapter of Struck Sightless...you reviewed the prologue.

topic52513.html
"We played Pin the Tail on the Reason My Life Feels So Insufficient, and nobody won." -Megan Moriarty




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*poof!*
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.




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HI Evi!!
I was wondering if you could review this poem. It's called Nothing Can Compare To You.
topic53241.html

Thanks so much for your help
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

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Hello Evi, I was wondering if you could critique my short story called
Principle Mackenzie
viewtopic.php?t=53552
Its a smidget under 1500 words.
Oh, and comma abuse will be present. So don't bother pointing it out because, well, I know it's there.
THANK YOU for the super-helpful and wonderfully awesome review!! You rock.
Naked I came from my mother's womb, and naked I will depart.
*Le Bible
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Here ya' go - topic54258.html. Sorry if it's suck-ish. :lol:
"People are afraid to die, but are also afraid to live."

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Awesome, could you review it again? topic54258.html
I updated it! Should be better. :)
"People are afraid to die, but are also afraid to live."

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Lol, well, I wrote a new story. Could use another review. Sorry if I'm overhauling you.

topic54389.html
"People are afraid to die, but are also afraid to live."

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Can you review this if you have time?
topic54518.html

Thanks!
~Poem
"We played Pin the Tail on the Reason My Life Feels So Insufficient, and nobody won." -Megan Moriarty




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viewtopic.php?t=53642

thanks.
Too bad we don't live to experinece death




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Hello there, if you have time you think you could review the first chapter in my novel?
I'd really appreciate it :)

-d@ydre@mer27

topic54520.html
"A black cat crossing your path signifies that the animal is going somewhere." ~courtesy of one of history's funniest men, Groucho Marx. ^_^




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Back to Square One (2) - the second part of my story, topic54556.html

Here is the first part just incase you need to refresh, topic54389.html
"People are afraid to die, but are also afraid to live."

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Here's the second part to Road Narrows,

topic54702.html

Thanks :D
~Poem
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Evi Jeebs!
I'd like a review on my poem please? post624755.html#p624755
"You can love someone so much...But you can never love people as much as you can miss them."




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Okay, people. Anyone in need of a review?
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.



If it looks like a duck, and it quacks like a duck…you should not be so quick to jump to conclusions.
— Cecil Gershwin Palmer