Hi guys, it's me PenNPaper. This is part of the stroy I'm currently writing, I plan to publish it if I can. This is just the first draft, so it may not be that good. All the more, please tell me how I can improve this piece of work.
Arthur was just putting the finishing touch to the hover-car when it happened, the phone call that changed his life. He rubbed his greasy hands on his pants, trying to rid them of the oil. Then he answered the call. It was Michael, Arthur’s co-worker.
“We got a situation on the Sky Suite, something crashed onto the roof, looks like a spaceship, but I can’t be sure,” Michael said.
“Got it, I’m coming,” Arthur replied.
Arthur hurriedly changed into his normal clothes, then hurried towards the nearest Teleportation Pad, TP for short, and flashed his Pad Pass at the guard, who let him pass. The TPs could only be used by the mechanics, police, or medics, the three most popular jobs in the Zanica station. As Arthur was a senior mechanic, he was more then entitled to use it. Those who were caught traveling illegally by the TPs were fined two thousand pounds.
Arthur searched for the button that would lead him to the Sky Suite, the highest point in the station. He ran his fingers down the many buttons until he found it. The moment he pressed it, he felt himself sucked into space, and he could hardly see his surroundings. The next second, he landed on the Arrival Pad, AP for short. The pads worked this way, the pads were powered by electricity, which would be released once the button was pressed. The electric bolts would then help to zap the person across to the destination, and because this happened extremely quickly, it seemed like teleportation.
Arthur stepped out of the pad, gazing at his surroundings. The Sky Suite was actually a park, with dome shaped houses scattered around. Trees were grown around a house to provide enough air. The air was much fresher around here than at the Middle Block, which was where Arthur lived. Trade ships flew all around, Arthur had never heard of a spaceship crashing though. Pilots had to pass a test before they were allowed to pilot a ship.
The moment Arthur arrived; he was greeted by a crowd. He squeezed through, and then was allowed over the barrier after he showed his Occupation Identification Card, also known as OIC.
“You’re late, as usual,” Michael said. “Since we’re all here, let’s go check out the spaceship.”
Arthur ignored that comment, he was far more interested in the spaceship that loomed over him. He walked into the shadow of the spaceship, and then noticed it. A panel near to the door, which was locked up.
Arthur headed straight for the panel. Then, using his MTA, mechanic’s tools assistant, called up his screw driver. He unscrewed the screws on the four corners of the panel cover before taking the thing off.
Arthur studied the wires that occupied most of the inside. They looked like they were split into different categories. One for the engine, one for the door and the last one for the lights. Arthur concentrated on the ones for the door, they were arranged in a zigzag pattern, leading from smaller panel to the other, which had a green light. He felt that if he could rearrange the wires to reverse the system, the door would open automatically.
Arthur called up his pliers and tried to detach the wires, but failed, as they were firmly stuck to the smaller panel, which were attached to the whole panel. If he yanked them out, he would risk the entire panel being ripped out. He opened up the smaller panel, and discovered that the wires went down below, so there was no way he could take them out. Then it struck him. I could cut them, he thought. He selected the wire cutter from the MTA and carefully cut each of the wires. The other mechanics, who were observing him, watched as the green light turned to red.
There was some cheering going on, but Arthur didn’t bother to congratulate himself. After all, it was no surprise that a senior mechanic like him was able to disable a simple lock. Instead, he walked towards the door, and then figured that even if he jumped, it was still too high for him to reach it. There must be a ramp somewhere that I could activate, he thought. He searched the area around it, but found nothing; he even asked the other mechanics to help him search the whole ship.
He paced back and forth, trying to figure out a way to go inside. He glanced back at the panel for a second, that second was just enough for him to spot another smaller panel, which was lighted red. He checked the arrangement of the wires, they were parallel, meaning that it was a one way flow, unfortunately they were burnt, so that they were broken, meaning that electricity couldn’t pass through. Arthur cursed, somebody had obviously overloaded the circuit. If only there was a way to fix the wires, he thought. There was. He cut off the burnt ends of the wire with the plier, then wore his rubber gloves. Tapping on his MTA, he called up the electrical wire, which was literally electrical, and taped it from one wire to the other. He repeated this process until all the wires had been taped.
There was a low buzzing noise, the ramp had been activated. Arthur climbed up, and tried to force open the door.
“No use buddy,” a policeman said, carrying a giant metal cutter with two hands. “We’ll do it instead.”
Arthur stepped back reluctantly, allowing the policeman to cut open the door. After several minutes, the policeman pushed the door down, and it landed with a clang.
“Now you can go in,” the policeman grinned.
Arthur nodded, normally it was the policemen who went into the dangerous places, but Arthur felt like going in, and his curiousness got the better of him. He sucked up his courage and took the step in.
It was dark inside, with a dim light in the distance. Arthur couldn’t see anything. He crept along the walls, feeling his way blindly with his hands. The light got brighter, and Arthur thought he could make out a person standing in the light.
“Hello?” he called out. There was no reply. He tried again, still no answer. He could see the floor clearly now, and didn’t need to feel his way. He walked in to a room.
The bright light blinded him, he quickly shielded them with his hands. Through the spaces of his fingers, he could see a man standing in front of him, wearing a brown vest and a blue jean.
“Who are you?” Arthur asked.
“I am Obah, from the planet Ranev, I have to come to warn you,” the man said.
“About what?”
“My people, the Kronans”
“I don’t exactly understand you”
“Well then, let me explain. My planet Ranev is dying, our resources are limited and global warming is becoming a major problem, we need another place to live. The nearest would be exactly a hundred and twenty two light years away, Zanica. The problem is, we have calculated, there isn’t enough space for both the Kronans and humans to live, so we have decided to chase you guys out. By using forceful means”
“And what are we supposed to do, can we fight back back?”
“Impossible, the Kronans are born to fight, you humans will lose.”
“You talk as if you hate us.”
“How can I hate you when I’m already warning you? You must leave.”
“We don’t have anywhere else to go, how long till they attack?.”
“A week”
“Well you can’t go back now can you, you need somewhere to stay, how about my place?”
“Really? Then, I thank you . . . Mr . .? “
“Call me Arthur, Arthur Cowell”
“Thank you, Arthur. . .”
“Let’s introduce you to the rest, and tell them about the danger we’re facing”
They emerged from the ship, two men. A mechanic and an alien. They were both about the same height, but Arthur was bigger in size. Arthur told everyone about the situation, about the danger they were about to face. Everyone got frightened, and children wailed. Everybody retired back home, with sad faces. Arthur sighed heavily, he was tired too. He ran his fingers through his thick brown hair, and yawned, then beckoned to Obah to follow him.
He didn’t take the TP as Obah was with him; instead, he took the lift back home. He was too tired to even take a bath and plunked himself straight on the bed and fell asleep.
Arthur was awakened by the doorbell; he got up and opened the door. He was greeted by a man, probably twice as big as an ordinary human, with huge hands and feet, and taller. He looked like an actual giant.
“It’s early, who are you?” he asked grumpily.
“Allow me to introduce myself, my name is Russell Jenkins, you may call me Russell. I work for Secret Society of Alien Contact, I heard about your story yesterday, may I see the alien?” Russell asked.
Arthur hesitated for a moment, unsure if he should trust Russell, and then decided that it would be alright just for a while.
“Alright then, but just for a while”
He let the man pass, then went to introduce Russell to Obah. Russell studied the alien for a while, then said.
“We may have a solution to your problem,” he began. “The SSAC has recently discovered a new type of technology, a bomb that would eliminate a whole planet, would it be possible to place it on your planet?”
“You want to kill my people?” Obah asked.
“Unless you would rather see the humans die?”
Obah hesitated, Arthur could tell there was a battle raging in his mind, of whether to let the humans or Kronans get eliminated, finally he said.
“Isn’t there any other solution?” he finally asked.
“None we can think up of at the moment”
“I’m just curious, why are you on our side?” Arthur asked.
“The rulers of my planet, who call themselves the Committee, are corrupted. They have put a micro chip inside our brain so that we will listen to their every order. As soon as I heard of it, I came here to warn you. This maybe the only way.” Obah replied
“Good then,” Russell said. “As you said, we only have a week from yesterday, meaning we only have six days left. If we travel at high speed using your spaceship, which is repaired, we could get there in a few hours. We need to formulate a plan though, of what we should do when we get there. I don’t think your kind would gladly welcome us with open arms, so we have to avoid as much attention as possible.”
“Yes, I do agree we need a plan. . .” Obah replied, but he was unsure of himself, he felt like a traitor. His mind was a whirl, he missed his family, but now they would hate him, for what he had done. They started to plan what they would do, but there was a major problem. Kronans had six fingers while humans had only five. They would need to grow an extra finger.
“Mr Arthur Cowell, I heard you’re a mechanic, I also hear you’re a part-time scientist. Perhaps you could invent something that would allow us to grow an extra finger?” Russell asked.
“Er. .yes that may be possible, but I would need certain materials to do so”
“We will supply you the materials, Arthur.”
“Yes that would be good. . .”
“What do you need?”
Arthur rattled of a list of things he needed, and Russell repeated the orders into his phone.
“Your items will be delivered in an hour, meanwhile you should memorise the plan” Russell said before slamming the door shut.
Arthur was left bewildered, he couldn’t figure out how Russell knew that he was a part-time scientist, as it was just a hobby. The materials arrived, and Arthur spent the rest of the day coming up with the solution, with Obah watching him.
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