I'm Hungry...

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39468.html

If you could rip this apart for me, that would be great.

If you're turned off by the length, it's alright. It won't break my heart.

Hi, Jabber.
*flutters eyelashes*
Chapter 1, possibly? topic39577.html
I am very much obliged.
Sarah
xxx

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39491.html

I'd love this one critiqued. Only one person commented on it so far, probably because I couldn't think of a decent title for it since it's part of something else, but I would love a review!!

Thanks so much!!

Thread, I command thee: Arise upon this scarred earth once more, claw out of the sunken dirt to embrace the waning light!

topic45927.html

Thanks.

Sh'yea!

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Thanks.

Mumbo Jumbo! =D

So. Umm. I have this strange little piece, yes? For Cal's contest. I tried writing it in a style I've never really experimented with before, and I really would love an opinion on whether it worked or not?

Please?

An Absence of Rose

Kind of depressing, kind of deep, FYI. I think I'm going through a traumatic/dramatic-story phase.

Thanks so much!

Looks like your thread's alive and kicking now!

topic48135.html

That poems needs shredding. Please and thank-you!

And the colab Con and I are doing. Shhhh. xD topic48508.html

Hi Jabbs! Here is the story I told you about.


http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic48256.html

Hope you enjoy!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40424.html prologue

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic41214.html Chapter 1 part 1


Sorry that I put two here but the prologue is just soooo short. Could you review them?

Pretty please.