I cant believe I am the first one to comment on this. This poem is like the best, you had everything in it what a good poem would need.
1) Punctuation.
2) The theme and the plot was great!
3) The use of words.
4) Even though it didn't rhyme it sound really good.
Thumbs up! (:
You need a bright star for the solar syste to speack! I give you a star!
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