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Jackie was highly aware of the bronze-haired girl seated beside her, a veiled madness hidden beneath her pretty features. She was aware of the string-bean legs wedged between the wooden slats on the window sill, moulding patterns into the soft, pale-freckled skin. She was aware of the girl’s chocolate mosaic eyes, studying every detail in their clouded line of vision. Though Jackie had that odd feeling you get when you suspect that people are less looking at you as looking through you.
“Sometimes there are no words.” Rue leant forward and whispered softly into Jackie’s ear.
“What d’you mean?” Jackie questioned, shifting on the thin wicker chair, [no comma] and facing the windowsill. Rue stretched with a short arm and reached for her companion’s tattered book. She fluttered the pages and ran her fingers along the scarlet cover.
“I mean, sometimes there are only colours and pictures, Jacqueline.” The small dark girl smiled playfully. Jackie felt a shiver run down her spine when Rue flashed that wan smile; something about it seemed to be concealing hidden menace. To hide her unease, she snatched the book from Rue and buried her face in it.
“What do you mean?” she asked after five minutes.
Rue chuckled emptily. “Oh Jacqueline, so far to go.” She paused for a moment, her eyes of brown velvet dilating, her eerie smirk still dancing on the moistened curve of her lips. “I will show you one day.”
Her face crumpled, [no comma] like rose-coloured gauze. Her eyes became wide and emotionless, her curving mouth dispersing a cold smile. Rue hunched up smaller on the sill, humming tunelessly to herself.
Then, she snapped into one of her usual habits.
Jackie watched her; [comma instead] not understanding, but accepting. Rue was giggling manically, running pearly fingers through her hair in frenzied movements. Her long, high-collared dandelion dress hung around her awkwardly, [no comma] like a strange yellow cloud. Matching the frock, maple strands tumbled out of her plait as she played with her hair. A leg escaped from underneath her and dangled at an odd angle from the edge of the windowsill. It reminded Jackie of a rag doll.
It was the only thing of beauty in the Home, [no comma] for her.
Not that Jimmy was one to make a habit of attacking poor defenceless little girls.
Jackie was highly aware of the bronze-haired girl seated beside her, a veiled madness hidden beneath her pretty features.
She was aware of the string-bean legs wedged between the wooden slats on the window sill, moulding patterns into the soft, pale-freckled skin. She was aware of the girl’s chocolate mosaic eyes, studying every detail in their clouded line of vision. Though Jackie had that odd feeling you get when you suspect that people are less looking at you as looking through you.
“Sometimes there are no words.” Rue leant forward and whispered softly into Jackie’s ear.
Rue chuckled emptily. “Oh Jacqueline, so far to go.” She paused for a moment, her eyes of brown velvet dilating, eerie smirk still dancing on the moistened curve of her lips.
Jackie watched her; not understanding, but accepting.
She remembered going to the funeral; four years ago, when Rue’s father had died from the drink.
“Nice day for a freak show, isn’t it?” scoffed a voice from behind them, accompanied with a malicious smile etched into a pasty face. The robust, crimson-faced bully of the Home appeared in front of them.
It was the only thing of beauty in the Home, for her.
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