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Audy
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Rosendorn
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Mon Apr 22, 2013 1:48 am
Rosendorn says... · Mon Apr 22, 2013 1:48 am
Done.

Next?
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Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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emilyleigh
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Wed Apr 24, 2013 5:59 pm
emilyleigh says... · Wed Apr 24, 2013 5:59 pm
Hi there! Could you please take a look at this short story I wrote? It's a first draft and I like the bones of it, but know it needs some work! So some feedback would be greatly appreciated:) It's called "Summerfest":
work.php?id=101028




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VampireSenshi
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Thu Apr 25, 2013 1:28 am
VampireSenshi says... · Thu Apr 25, 2013 1:28 am
When you have time :D

work.php?id=101167
<YWS>
<NE1>

NIGHT is always watching...




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lilcanich
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elcuidador
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Fri Apr 26, 2013 6:45 pm
elcuidador says... · Fri Apr 26, 2013 6:45 pm
work.php?id=100545
Or
work.php?id=101186

Here's two poems for ya xD enjoy and thanks.
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Aley
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Sun Apr 28, 2013 3:16 am
Aley says... · Sun Apr 28, 2013 3:16 am
If you totally want some meat to eat, you can check out these. They need some thinning. I'll put up the options and you pick what you think looks tasty~

work.php?id=99324
work.php?id=100940
work.php?id=100011

-cough-

If nothing looks appetizing, you can always go back to Audy. I won't be hurt a'tall.




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Rosendorn
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Mon Apr 29, 2013 1:41 am
Rosendorn says... · Mon Apr 29, 2013 1:41 am
Everybody but Gravy and Aley are done. You're up next.

Keep 'em coming.
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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Carina
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Tue Apr 30, 2013 1:40 am
Carina says... · Tue Apr 30, 2013 1:40 am
Hey, Rosey! Could you give me some feedback on a short story of mine and tell me what you think?

work.php?id=101138

Thanks! I highly appreciate it. :]
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screamandshout
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Thu May 09, 2013 9:01 pm
screamandshout says... · Thu May 09, 2013 9:01 pm
Would you review my poem for me? Please and thank you!

work.php?id=101373




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Tabithalillian
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Thu May 23, 2013 4:37 pm
Tabithalillian says... · Thu May 23, 2013 4:37 pm
I'd love a review of the first chapter of a novel i'm working on! Thank you!

work.php?id=101581
Living in a tower




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Ray112
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Thu May 23, 2013 11:01 pm
Ray112 says... · Thu May 23, 2013 11:01 pm
Hi! I posted this a little while ago. Could you review it for me? :)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=101564
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HostofHorus
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Wed May 29, 2013 5:45 am
HostofHorus says... · Wed May 29, 2013 5:45 am
Rosey! My favorite reviewer! Could I trouble you to read this for me? :) Your skills would be greatly appreciated!

work.php?id=101674
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
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Stories Poems © As of January 1st 2014

Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)




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Iggy
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Fri May 31, 2013 3:27 am
Iggy says... · Fri May 31, 2013 3:27 am
Hello, dear! Would you be so kind as to review this for me? :)

I'd super appreciate it and if there's any story you like me to review, I'd be honored to do so!

Here's a gift as thanks. ;)

Click here.
Last edited by Iggy on Mon Jun 17, 2013 6:33 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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gauravkundu32
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Fri May 31, 2013 4:04 pm
gauravkundu32 says... · Fri May 31, 2013 4:04 pm
Would you please review this work FEAR [new chapter 4]
Last edited by gauravkundu32 on Mon Jun 24, 2013 3:49 am, edited 2 times in total.
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