Hi! My story is The Devil In the Wishing Well, but it's in three parts. It's not hugely long altogether (almost 4,000 words) and I would really, really appreciate it if you read all three. But I don't mind if you only read one or two parts (though I doubt they would make sense out of order). It's for a contest, and I really, really need constructive feedback! This is for the first part, and it links to the others: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=96979
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
Chapter 5 of my novel! work.php?id=97373 (go ahead and read the other chapters, no need to review them if you don't want to though) Please and thank you
I will review for you! PM about it if you need one!
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