on castles and cupboards

1} beginning
2} mushroom mansion
3} the attic
4} celery
5} ramblings
6} scattered
7} insignificant
8} @_@
9} melody
10} doubts
11} mmm
12} ahh
13} thirteen
14} an exercise in rhyming
15} ...
16} titles should come at the end.
17} gravity
18} looking up
19} ? !
20} XP
21} the boot
22} evening drives
23} totally didn't almost forget about napo today
24} actually missed napo yesterday, oops ^^'
25} smile
26} candy wrapper
27} dear mr. orange
28} lazy
29} :|
30} birdy
31} ._.
32} procrastination
33} kinda dark, i guess?
34} lighter
35} hm
36} the end

Beginning

I really liked the topic of this one! The line, "afraid of slipping outside the lines" Really grabbed my attention. Great poem! Wouldn't change a thing!

Mushroom Mansion

I really liked the topic of this one too! The woodsy feel added a lot and I enjoyed the orange title you used! Great poem! Wouldn't change a thing!

The Attic

The imagery in this one was fantastic! I could totally feel the musty atmosphere and see all of the old boxes. My favorite line was, "illuminating particles of dust." I could see the faint glow coming in from the window so well! Really great poem! Would change a thing!

Keep on writing! You're doing great!

prompt from @AtlasWut: “make a list of things you don't like (broccoli, snow, writers block, etc) then pick one and write a poem romanticizing it” C: