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Fri Dec 21, 2012 8:37 pm
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megsug says...



Welcome and, please, ignore my desperation. :wink:

Am confident about:
-Short Stories (of any genre)
-Novels (I'm willing to read it all, but you'll have to request that, and probably remind me as each chapter is posted. I'm also open to reviewing individual chapters.)
-Fan Fiction (I can't promise to be in the know, but I will review it like a normal story)
-Essays
-Scripts
-Anything else resembling prose

what I enjoy reading but don't really know a lot about:
Poetry (I am sorry to my poets out there)

Please include the link to your work in your request
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Sun Dec 23, 2012 10:38 am
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ShakespeareWallah says...



Here's one for you,

Spoiler! :


please?

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Mon Dec 24, 2012 1:05 am
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megsug says...



Puckerman done! Ready to beg for the next piece.
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Tue Dec 25, 2012 1:28 am
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pahoem says...



I am just slowly starting to post chapters to my novel Sacrifice. It is a romance plus fantasy and it would be so muchly appreciated for you to tell me what is bad about it so I can fix it! (and maybe good stuff too) ;) Thanks!!
  





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Tue Dec 25, 2012 4:03 am
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megsug says...



Pahoem, I'd love to! Could you possibly give me a link to the first chapter? Since it is the holidays, I'll ask you to wait until the day after tomorrow, but I'll definitely get on it before December's out.
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Thu Dec 27, 2012 1:33 am
megsug says...



Pahoem done. Preparing to get down on knees to beg.
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Fri Dec 28, 2012 2:07 pm
Clarity says...



Can you review this please?

Thanks :D
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Sat Dec 29, 2012 12:50 am
katerzzz says...



Hello! I'm about to head off to bed now but could you take a look at my first submission on here please? :)
Thanks! :)
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Sat Dec 29, 2012 5:20 pm
megsug says...



Clarity done.
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Sun Dec 30, 2012 9:57 pm
megsug says...



Katerzzz is done.
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Tue Jan 01, 2013 8:01 pm
TheWorldIsMyLife says...



I'm slowly posting my latest romance story if you'd take a look....
profile/TheWorldIsMyLife/portfolio/458443
That's a link to the folder it's in :D
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Thu Jan 03, 2013 10:05 pm
AliceDreams says...



I'm new to this website and if you could give me a review you'd make me very happy! This is a link to the first chapter of a (hopefully) novel. I started it as a sort of stress relief and it does swear a bit, but I'd be really interested to hear what you think about it. It may be a bit confusing in the first chapter, but hopfully it will become more clear as I post more.
Thank you for reading!

Link: work.php?id=98795
  





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Mon Jan 07, 2013 11:07 pm
megsug says...



AliceDreams done for the moment after far too long.
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Sat Jan 12, 2013 11:36 pm
megsug says...



Forgot to say World is done. Whups.
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Sat Jan 19, 2013 3:37 am
Kakali says...



Uhm, if you have the time, I could use a nit-picker for my novel I have been working on.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=99162
Please and thanks! If I get the chance to see one of your works, I will return the favor!
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