I would love to have someone review this. The formatting screwed up. But the content is all there. I would love your honest thoughts, responses, feelings, emotions, questions, and anything you have to say.
Hello i was wondering if you guys could review my first chapter of my novel. i really need some professional advice, so it would be great if you guys could review it. thank in advance. work.php?id=99215
Hello. I'm looking for some feedback on this short story. I guess it's within the fanfic vein, though i generally dislike those. But i wrote it for a contest and i love the subject matter. At the moment it's one of the few finished works i still have and i'd like some feedback on it.
I know it's probably few of you (if any) who know any of the history within the Warcraft universe, so i'm mostly looking for feedback on writing style, grammar, creativity etc.
Found out about the contest a bit late, so when i wrote it i was really rushed. Therefore i cheaply cut it into chapters to save time. I could also use tips on bridging storys together, as it's something i'm struggling with.
Any help and replies would be great, looking forward to it. Cheers.
Hello hello Megsug. I'm writing a novel, and I would very much appreciate a new opinion on the first chapter/prologue. It was posted a while ago and I think it's time to give it a new review, and i would very much appreciate a new opinion So when you have time, could you read?
