Pretty Please Give Me Things to Review

Heyo, could you do me a huge favor and give me a review on my short story here? I'm not that good at writing short stories and I want to improve that aspect of my writing. Here it is: work.php?id=99722

Thanks! You're the greatest

TuckEr EllsworTh

Sorry for not reviewing... at all in far too long. I've been busy. However, Birkoff is done.

I forgot to say that Kahzy's done.

This is a short story. I love nit-picking! It really helps.

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Pretty please can you review my work? I'd really appreciate it!

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can you please review this? work.php?id=100845

Mari has been done for a while... I apologize for how long it's taking again.

Dogs done.

Hi megsug,

could you review this for me please?

work.php?id=100892

thanks

If you get a chance would appreciate a review for the first part of chapter one of my novel.

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also willing to review something for you if you want.

Alright, I'm all caught up now. I know it's been a while since I posted, but I wanted to get entirely done with all the reviews I needed to do, before more requests came in.
Life has slowed down some, so my reviews should be timely.
Thanks. Megs~

You really must like reviewing. ☺

Try this one.

Quest Unable Chapter One (Rough Draft)

Done with ShortBus~ For some reason I don't remember getting notified about a post in my WRFF o.o
Anyways~ Anyone else?

Hi!

Be very grateful if you'd vomit criticism all over this: Grey Heart - 1