Pretty Please Give Me Things to Review

Welcome and, please, ignore my desperation.

Am confident about:
-Short Stories (of any genre)
-Novels (I'm willing to read it all, but you'll have to request that, and probably remind me as each chapter is posted. I'm also open to reviewing individual chapters.)
-Fan Fiction (I can't promise to be in the know, but I will review it like a normal story)
-Essays
-Scripts
-Anything else resembling prose

what I enjoy reading but don't really know a lot about:
Poetry (I am sorry to my poets out there)

Please include the link to your work in your request

Here's one for you,

Spoiler

ta-da!

please?

Thanks.

Puckerman done! Ready to beg for the next piece.

I am just slowly starting to post chapters to my novel Sacrifice. It is a romance plus fantasy and it would be so muchly appreciated for you to tell me what is bad about it so I can fix it! (and maybe good stuff too) Thanks!!

Pahoem, I'd love to! Could you possibly give me a link to the first chapter? Since it is the holidays, I'll ask you to wait until the day after tomorrow, but I'll definitely get on it before December's out.

Pahoem done. Preparing to get down on knees to beg.

Can you review this please?

Thanks

Hello! I'm about to head off to bed now but could you take a look at my first submission on here please?
Thanks!

Clarity done.

Katerzzz is done.

I'm slowly posting my latest romance story if you'd take a look....
profile/TheWorldIsMyLife/portfolio/458443
That's a link to the folder it's in

I'm new to this website and if you could give me a review you'd make me very happy! This is a link to the first chapter of a (hopefully) novel. I started it as a sort of stress relief and it does swear a bit, but I'd be really interested to hear what you think about it. It may be a bit confusing in the first chapter, but hopfully it will become more clear as I post more.
Thank you for reading!

Link: work.php?id=98795

AliceDreams done for the moment after far too long.

Forgot to say World is done. Whups.

Uhm, if you have the time, I could use a nit-picker for my novel I have been working on.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=99162
Please and thanks! If I get the chance to see one of your works, I will return the favor!