Pretty Please Give Me Things to Review

Hey! Could you review my first & second chapter? Here's the link for chapter one & there's a link for chapter two in a comment on chapter one.

The Good Life - Chapter One

-Nicole

Could you please read and review my short story http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108465 ....Did I link it right?

Hey @Mirfain26,
I'd be happy to give you a review (and welcome to the site). To give a link, just put your link in this bbcode: [url][/url]

@Isha done... until she updates her story (which is worth checking out if anyone's looking for a read...)

@lakegirls is finished!

@Mirfain26 done as well. Who's next?

Hi there! Nerd Bird here! I would greatly appreciate it if you could give my first two chapters a once over

Chapter 1:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108653
Chapter 2: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108737

Many thanks!
XX

NerdBird done~

Hi! I have posted my first chapter of the novel. There are some reviews but mostly about grammar. I request you to tell me whether the plot is engaging.
(I have no problem, if you say, that it was stupid).
The Perfect Thief (Working title) Chapter 1

Hey. I was wondering if you could review the fanfiction novel I'm writing. Its my first work so I apologize if it is...well...terrible. Its Teen Titans related...I don't know if you like them or not but I still ask if you could give a shot and review (with some really helpful writing tips, perhaps?) Thank you very much.

Prologue
The Shadow's Light: The Two Thieves - Prologue

--Spiritwolf1011

hey there, I need review of the chapter I just wrote so i request you to review this Diakrino- the darkness within (chapter 2) and if possible please also review the first chapter as well Diakrino- the darkness within (Chapter 1). I'd be highly grateful to you.Thanks.

@Gaurav009 done, unless he wanted me to review is prologue too?

I'd like somebody to critique my Intro, I'd love to hear something constructive or at least an opinion on the voice/tone/pacing/choice of words and maybe even plot so far.

Here's mine! work.php?id=10705http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=10536

Hello,

Project: Dead Anna (Chapter 1)

Would much appreciate a little feedback on this...
Mainly looking for feedback on readibility and not so much nitpicks. Thanks