Young Writers Society

Hey everyone!

I'm constantly browsing this site in hopes of finding another great chapter to reviewer.
But I've decided to play it smart and let you come to me, instead. *laughs evilly*

So come one, come all, and let me work my magic!

What I will review:

Fantasy
Action/Adventure
Romance
General fiction.

Both in short story and novel length.


For the rest of the categories, I'm simply not very good at them and my reviews wouldn't be worth much.

Also, I would really appreciate a comeback to my reviews. Either on this thread, or following my review on your own thread. I often go through a lot of my time and quite some patience to review and it would be nice to know it helped. Or not.

These a few examples of my reviews:
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My reasons for sharing these links? I can be very thorough, and sometimes, some might perceive me as harsh. I try to be as delicate as possible and demonstrate the good points as much as the bad. But if you read these and don't like my reviewing style, then please don't ask me to review; It's just annoying and rude to tell me my review stinks because you have not yet become accustomed to critism.

Don't forget to link your chapter with your request and feel free to ask me for a review; I will get to it as soon as possible!

I would like to add something here. I have a weird schedule. My fiancé is a trucker and when he's home, I stay away from the internet. So, if he's home, and you request a review, it might take a couple days. If not, I'm not it like jam on peanut butter.

I'm gonna comment here, even though I already asked

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PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE?????? (I know you pretty much said yes already though )

Haha. I did say yes, and it's done already! Thanks for the request!

Hey
So, would you like to review my short story then?
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Thank you and thank you.

Ziggie - done!

Thank you so much for that. You don't understand how much your review helped. Writing the story in first person, I think I'm going to try that so as to portray the MC's emotion more. Thank you again.

I think it would help a lot, give more depth to your MC. I'm glad I helped; you made MY day!

Tanya

hey fellow P.C.! please review my novel Firebird

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'tis done, Pointe!

Hey, Mom!

Could you review this?

It's the second chapter of my and Lily's project which she is not doin now and the name's changed and it's on my ID. Okay, enough of it.

Tis done, my daughter!

Hey Tanya! (:
Would you please help me review this short story? I plan to submit it for YWLJ but I've not been getting much help on the extended version (it was initially rather short and people suggested that I expand it). I'm perfectly fine with a harsh review!

Of course, I'm definitely willing to repay the favour by reviewing one of your pieces too, if you want!
Thank you so much!
~Meep(:

This is a little long...
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But it'd be awesome if you could review! Nobody really wants to read it all the way through, I guess... the storyline gets kind of pathetic, too.
But still If you want to, then PLEASE do! xD
thank youu! xxxx

Would you be willing to check my story? topic73145.html

Someone told me you do really good reviews, could you review this? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic72883.html thank you, smilie face

(and be as harsh as you like, I think I need it.)