Hi Lavvie, I would love if you could review my story. I need someone to review all the chapters. Most people only read the first three. It seem a bit boring in the beginning, but it gets better as you get into it. Please can you go through and read all the chapters.
It is called Search for the Ruby of Fire and is a fantasy\ action adventure\ a bit fan fiction. It has dragons as the main characters and I won't give away anymore. It has no 16, 18, L, M, V tags just to let you know. Here is the link.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-124445
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