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Kale · 2015-07-23T03:22:16Z

Welcome to the General Request Repository This is the place to make general review requests, and also the place to which general request threads are banished. While requesting here means that you may get more than four reviews in one go, be warned: There is no guarantee that you will get reviews. As with all threads in WRFF, there are a few requirements to follow: For Requesters : Only one open request at a time. A request is considered open if it is the last post in the thread. In other words, do not double-post . If you would like to request reviews on a different work and your post is the last one in the thread, edit your post to update it . Remember to include a link to the work you want reviewed. If you make your work easy to get to, you're more likely to get reviews. Also, be sure to thank your reviewers for reviewing , even if you don't agree with what they said in their review. For Reviewers : Please Like the posts of any requests you fill . Good luck, and may the reviewers be kind to you.

DivergentDemigod

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Points 93

Reviews 216

Sun Apr 10, 2016 4:37 pm

DivergentDemigod says... · Sun Apr 10, 2016 4:37 pm

Hey everyone...
Plz review my work "the secret dream world of a book-o-holic" it's still sitting in the green room...

Here's the link to it....

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=128439

Thank you

Last edited by DivergentDemigod on Wed May 11, 2016 2:28 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Don't be someone who searches, finds and runs away.

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FlowerToBloom

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Points 240

Reviews 0

Mon Apr 11, 2016 4:54 pm

FlowerToBloom says... · Mon Apr 11, 2016 4:54 pm

Hello,
I would be pleased if anyone could review the prologue of my book I'm attempting to write named Seek. I am no Stephen King bu I am trying my best to make it a good story! I already have enough written for it to be a novella so this is really just the beginning.

Prologue

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BlueJayWalker10

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Points 1265

Reviews 40

Tue Apr 12, 2016 11:36 pm

BlueJayWalker10 says... · Tue Apr 12, 2016 11:36 pm

Hey there! So, I know that I may not get a review, but I'd like to try anyway on this one.
Could you please review my work, Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 2? I've already gotten several reviews on the first chapter--most people told me to cut it out as it was unneeded--but I've only gotten I think three or four on this one.
Thanks!

"Red is the color of fate, right?"
-Zen Wisteria, Snow White with the Red Hair

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DivergentDemigod

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Points 93

Reviews 216

Wed Apr 13, 2016 10:43 am

DivergentDemigod says... · Wed Apr 13, 2016 10:43 am

I would be really grateful if you guys reviewed my work "when I was young..."

LIVE YOUNG! LIVE FREE!

Don't be someone who searches, finds and runs away.

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You have to get lost before you find yourself.

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yizhongt

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Points 133

Reviews 98

Wed Apr 20, 2016 3:43 am

yizhongt says... · Wed Apr 20, 2016 3:43 am

Hey everyone, could someone please review:

Starlight: Chapter 2 (Part II)

Thanks in advance!

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snakeboy54

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Points 322

Reviews 8

Fri Apr 22, 2016 6:38 pm

snakeboy54 says... · Fri Apr 22, 2016 6:38 pm

I would like for a review for the first chapter of my new series that i'm starting up called "The Hell Bound Kids"

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PoeticCowboy

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Points 264

Reviews 17

Fri Apr 22, 2016 10:01 pm

PoeticCowboy says... · Fri Apr 22, 2016 10:01 pm

Hey guys, I am new here. I just wanted some advise on my book, Invincible, and I was wondering if you guys would be free enough to give a person some advise.

Thanks,

~Poetic Cowboy

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Far1812

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Points 365

Reviews 7

Mon May 02, 2016 5:20 am

Far1812 says... · Mon May 02, 2016 5:20 am

Hello lovelies! I welcome any and all reviews for my as-yet-unnamed novel. The chapters are fairly short, so they should be a quick read.

A brief description: The many seasons of Jamie and his best friend Jessica. (Plus superpowers)

Of Dust Balls
Of Summer Days

Thank you kindly in advance! (I'll thank you individually if you review.)

Never start a land war in Asia.

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MooMoo

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Points 646

Reviews 1

Tue May 03, 2016 10:41 pm

MooMoo says... · Tue May 03, 2016 10:41 pm

I would really love it if someone (or multiple someones) read my novel. I have been on here off and on for years and submitted many clips.

http://www.lulu.com/shop/joanna-malcom/ ... 74076.html

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DivergentDemigod

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Points 93

Reviews 216

Wed May 11, 2016 2:26 pm

DivergentDemigod says... · Wed May 11, 2016 2:26 pm

Hi everyone...
Plz review my work "dear Mr maple tree"

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=129182#c584147

LIVE YOUNG! LIVE FREE!

Don't be someone who searches, finds and runs away.

Spoiler

You have to get lost before you find yourself.

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SacredPen

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Points 53

Reviews 24

Fri May 27, 2016 5:16 am

SacredPen says... · Fri May 27, 2016 5:16 am

MUST. HAVE. REVIEW. ON. HORROR. STORY.

or I won't know what to do for the next part...

Taking A Nap. Yawn 1 (First Draft)

pls...4 jus a yen a dai, u can stop short stories from going untouched. hlp...pls...

"Why do I need money to live? Can't I just, like, photosynthesize or something?"

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DivergentDemigod

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Points 93

Reviews 216

Wed Jun 08, 2016 12:43 pm

DivergentDemigod says... · Wed Jun 08, 2016 12:43 pm

Hey peeps i'm trying my han at short stories...
Plz review and tell me what u think of it???

Here is the link

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/phangirldivergent46/Ukel-129640

LIVE YOUNG! LIVE FREE!

Don't be someone who searches, finds and runs away.

Spoiler

You have to get lost before you find yourself.

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Aravind

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Points 743

Reviews 32

Mon Jun 20, 2016 6:08 pm

Aravind says... · Mon Jun 20, 2016 6:08 pm

I published my first work for YWS titled "Chase".

Chase

Hope you enjoy reading and reviewing it

Cheers

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nwakaemechinonso12

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Points 2839

Reviews 28

Thu Jun 30, 2016 9:50 pm

nwakaemechinonso12 says... · Thu Jun 30, 2016 9:50 pm

kindly review my latest work "THE BOOKWORM"

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Laurenh6

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Points 3737

Reviews 93

Sun Jul 10, 2016 10:30 pm

Laurenh6 says... · Sun Jul 10, 2016 10:30 pm

Please could I have some feedback on the "Watching" - the most recent version (improved version) - thank you

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