General Request Repository

Hey! I would LOVE to get a review on my newest work:

Your Last Minute Preparations 10 Days Before Christmas

It is pretty short, and comical! Enjoy! <3

Hi, I was really hoping someone could review my novel chapters. I completely rewrote my chapter 1 from scratch and haven't really gotten any feedback on it since I reposted it a couple of weeks ago. Any opinions on my chapter 2 would be greatly appreciated as well! Posting all chapters below for anyone who prefers background info before reviewing. Thanks!
-Hawk

Prologue, The Name Game
Chapter 1.1, The Name Game **UPDATED**
Chapter 1.2, The Name Game
Chapter 2.1, The Name Game
Chapter 2.2, The Name Game **UPDATED**

Hello! I'm new to YWS, just made my account today, and I'm looking for reviews on my first poem I've posted to the site.
I'm Only 18
Thanks! I shall be infinitely grateful!

I'd love someone to review my short novel, starting with chapter one, sci-fi action adventure, the other chapters can be found on the side bar like usual. Thanks!


Bastion: Barracuda - Chapter One - Red Rum

Hello! I'm looking for some feedback on my satire The Creativity Epidemic It's my first satire that I've written and I could really use some reviews! Thanks! :3

Please review my play that cannot be named. Seriously. I cannot think of a name! Help please!!!! Help! I need an title for this piece!! It's sad. That's seriously the name of it as of now. PLEEEEEEEEASE help me!!!!!

I would love a review on my new poem "on waiting". It's more abstract than what I typically do, and a bit out of my comfort zone, so I'd really like to hear some feedback.

Please Review Secrets Chapter 1

I'd like a review on this Winnie the Punk

I've already had 2 , but I'd still like a little more feedback. Thank you!

I'd love someone to review Chapter one of my story, The Winged. Thanks!

-AnarchyWolf

Hey guys, would any of you mind reviewing this first chapter for me?

Chapter 1: Revelations

Hi, I've posted 5 chapters of my novel Near To You. Any feedback on any of the chapters would be greatly appreciated! I linked the first chapter, the others can be found on the sidebar. Thanks in advance!

I was looking at my portfolio and guess what I continued- 2 MINUTES! I just finished part two. I decided to make one more part after it!Can people please review it? Read '2 minutes' and then read this! Sorry that it took so long for those who have been waiting!

2 minutes

2 Minutes - Part 2

Hey there folks,

I've had this story building up in my head over the past years and decided to try my hand at putting it to paper.

Mind, I'm an absolute amateur as a writer and, as such, would really appreciate any feedback.

Here's the first draft of the prologue and first chapter.

This is a bit of a hybrid "semi-realistic" fantasy (oxymoron, I know...) set in our actual world but with your recommended dosage of magic, divinities, swordplay and whatnot. If it matters, the technological state of society would be the equivalent to where we were in around the 1500s.

Many thanks!

Hey I'd like a review on my newest work titled "The Outsider". Please and thank you

The Outsider