General Request Repository

Kale · 2015-07-23T03:22:16Z

Welcome to the General Request Repository This is the place to make general review requests, and also the place to which general request threads are banished. While requesting here means that you may get more than four reviews in one go, be warned: There is no guarantee that you will get reviews. As with all threads in WRFF, there are a few requirements to follow: For Requesters : Only one open request at a time. A request is considered open if it is the last post in the thread. In other words, do not double-post . If you would like to request reviews on a different work and your post is the last one in the thread, edit your post to update it . Remember to include a link to the work you want reviewed. If you make your work easy to get to, you're more likely to get reviews. Also, be sure to thank your reviewers for reviewing , even if you don't agree with what they said in their review. For Reviewers : Please Like the posts of any requests you fill . Good luck, and may the reviewers be kind to you.

ExOmelas

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Points 31396

Reviews 760

Tue Jul 12, 2016 2:28 pm

ExOmelas says... · Tue Jul 12, 2016 2:28 pm

Hi all, please could you review the latest chapter of my sci-fi series Monkey Boy's Adventures in Space?

Monkey Boy's Adventures In Space - 2.2

Happy to provide a synopsis of the story so far if necessary.

Cheers, Biscuits

What fools these mortals be!
William Shakespeare
A Midsummer Night's Dream

Who cares if one more light goes out?
Well I do.
Linkin Park
One More Light

I'm bigger than a hexidecimal...

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penfeme

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Points 137

Reviews 28

Fri Jul 15, 2016 9:13 pm

penfeme says... · Fri Jul 15, 2016 9:13 pm

I would greatly appreciate a review for my poem "all that I am is starlight, dim" - thanks!

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JuliasSneezer

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Points 12

Reviews 58

Mon Jul 18, 2016 11:58 am

JuliasSneezer says... · Mon Jul 18, 2016 11:58 am

Hi, everyone!

I would really appreciate it if someone could please review the first chapter of my novel in progress:

The Cave - Chapter I - The Operation

Thank you to anyone who reviews! Anyone who reviews, I promise to review something of theirs! Many thanks,

-Cupcakes :smt023

"When in doubt, improvise!"
-Winny the woodpecker

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Kazeybear

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Points 11

Reviews 64

Mon Jul 25, 2016 10:43 am

Kazeybear says... · Mon Jul 25, 2016 10:43 am

I would love a review on my poem at; Pain

Thank you very much!

~Kazey

We write to taste life twice, in the moment and in retrospect - Anaïs Nin
You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you - Ray Bradbury

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MemeQueen

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Points 240

Reviews 0

Mon Jul 25, 2016 7:26 pm

MemeQueen says... · Mon Jul 25, 2016 7:26 pm

If it's not too much trouble, could I have a review on my first chapter? Thank you alll.

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Redbox275

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Points 1931

Reviews 91

Tue Jul 26, 2016 1:43 am

Redbox275 says... · Tue Jul 26, 2016 1:43 am

I would like someone to review my short story

The Dead Boy, the Shattered Locket, and the Broken Childhood Memories

The Dead Boy, the Shattered Locket, and the Broken Childhood Memories[url][/url]

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MayaM

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Points 0

Reviews 8

Wed Jul 27, 2016 10:49 pm

MayaM says... · Wed Jul 27, 2016 10:49 pm

If someone could review my short story called: Alone with my Thoughts that would be incredible! Thanks!

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emoglobiin

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Points 10

Reviews 4

Sun Aug 07, 2016 2:18 pm

emoglobiin says... · Sun Aug 07, 2016 2:18 pm

I'm a new one here and could use some advise on my writing. I'd appreciate it if you read my short story "The A Team".

link: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/emoglobiin/The-A-Team-130875

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Kazeybear

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Points 11

Reviews 64

Thu Aug 11, 2016 6:58 pm

Kazeybear says... · Thu Aug 11, 2016 6:58 pm

i would love a review on my most recent poem, Only Time Will Tell

We write to taste life twice, in the moment and in retrospect - Anaïs Nin
You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you - Ray Bradbury

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Ejay1806

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Points 9

Reviews 43

Fri Aug 12, 2016 9:55 am

Ejay1806 says... · Fri Aug 12, 2016 9:55 am

I am looking for reviews for my poem Friend and Money:A Mystery

Ejay

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restlessheart14

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Points 138

Reviews 26

Sun Aug 21, 2016 11:49 pm

restlessheart14 says... · Sun Aug 21, 2016 11:49 pm

Hey all! I would like to request a review on my piece called night and day. It is a short poem that highlights romanticism and sound devices. Thanks

Night and Day

Restlessheart

"Each day means a new 24 hours. Each day means everything's possible again. You live in the moment, you die in the moment, you take it all one day at a time."

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Vellichor

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Points 2989

Reviews 42

Sun Sep 04, 2016 2:34 am

Vellichor says... · Sun Sep 04, 2016 2:34 am

If anyone had some free time, I would very much appreciate any feedback on my poem, The Power of Words. I'm new to poetry, so don't expect much xD Thank you all!

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