General Request Repository

Hey everyone...
Plz review my work "the secret dream world of a book-o-holic" it's still sitting in the green room...
Here's the link to it....

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=128439

Thank you

Hello,
I would be pleased if anyone could review the prologue of my book I'm attempting to write named Seek. I am no Stephen King bu I am trying my best to make it a good story! I already have enough written for it to be a novella so this is really just the beginning.

Prologue

Hey there! So, I know that I may not get a review, but I'd like to try anyway on this one.
Could you please review my work, Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 2? I've already gotten several reviews on the first chapter--most people told me to cut it out as it was unneeded--but I've only gotten I think three or four on this one.
Thanks!

I would be really grateful if you guys reviewed my work "when I was young..."

Hey everyone, could someone please review:

Starlight: Chapter 2 (Part II)

Thanks in advance!

I would like for a review for the first chapter of my new series that i'm starting up called "The Hell Bound Kids"

Hey guys, I am new here. I just wanted some advise on my book, Invincible, and I was wondering if you guys would be free enough to give a person some advise.

Thanks,

~Poetic Cowboy

Hello lovelies! I welcome any and all reviews for my as-yet-unnamed novel. The chapters are fairly short, so they should be a quick read.

A brief description: The many seasons of Jamie and his best friend Jessica. (Plus superpowers)

Of Dust Balls
Of Summer Days

Thank you kindly in advance! (I'll thank you individually if you review.)

I would really love it if someone (or multiple someones) read my novel. I have been on here off and on for years and submitted many clips.

http://www.lulu.com/shop/joanna-malcom/ ... 74076.html

Hi everyone...
Plz review my work "dear Mr maple tree"

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=129182#c584147

MUST. HAVE. REVIEW. ON. HORROR. STORY.


or I won't know what to do for the next part...

Taking A Nap. Yawn 1 (First Draft)

pls...4 jus a yen a dai, u can stop short stories from going untouched. hlp...pls...

Hey peeps i'm trying my han at short stories...
Plz review and tell me what u think of it???

Here is the link

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/phangirldivergent46/Ukel-129640

I published my first work for YWS titled "Chase".

Chase


Hope you enjoy reading and reviewing it

kindly review my latest work "THE BOOKWORM"

Please could I have some feedback on the "Watching" - the most recent version (improved version) - thank you