You saw what happened to Jalmoc and decided to become friends with the evil bunnies. After months and months of enjoying salad with a side of carrots every day at three o'clock, one of the bunnies started whispering to the one next to him and so on and so on until blabber mouth bunny Mary shouted out loud that which was whispered to her, "Mr. MacGregor regards goofy smurf as an easier target rabbit? Well, one day you decided to ignore this comment that haunted your dreams when you had too much celery before bed and you went with your good friend Peter to raid the gardeners garden. It was all fun and games until you realized that MacGregor was home, on his porch, with a gun aimed for Peter. You shouted 'RUN' and threw Peter to the gate but this put you in the line of fire and one bullet shot deep and killed you instantly. All for a good set of friends.
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