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BondGirl007
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Wed Dec 08, 2010 4:42 pm
BondGirl007 says... · Wed Dec 08, 2010 4:42 pm
Yuriyuriyuri here's something easy for you to do xD topic72951.html
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Yuriiko
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Thu Dec 09, 2010 1:22 pm
Yuriiko says... · Thu Dec 09, 2010 1:22 pm
Done!
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Sins
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Thu Dec 09, 2010 4:13 pm
Sins says... · Thu Dec 09, 2010 4:13 pm
Would you mid reviewing this for me, Yuri?

topic72983.html

It's a short story of mine. A little sketchy... but hey. xD Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.




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Yuriiko
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Fri Dec 10, 2010 11:47 am
Yuriiko says... · Fri Dec 10, 2010 11:47 am
Done, Sniks!
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MiaParamore
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Fri Dec 10, 2010 1:19 pm
MiaParamore says... · Fri Dec 10, 2010 1:19 pm
Hey Yuri! '

Here: [url=http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=72937] Know I'm Here(2)
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
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Yuriiko
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Fri Dec 10, 2010 1:42 pm
Yuriiko says... · Fri Dec 10, 2010 1:42 pm
Skins wrote:Would you mid reviewing this for me, Yuri?

topic72983.html

It's a short story of mine. A little sketchy... but hey. xD Please and thank you!


I'm done, Sniks. lol
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Angela
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Fri Dec 10, 2010 7:05 pm
Angela says... · Fri Dec 10, 2010 7:05 pm
Hey Yuri! I was wondering if you would mind reviewing a ROMANTIC SHORT STORY of mine, Almost. I have plans to submit it to a magazine, and want it to be in tip-top condition. Here's the link:

viewtopic.php?t=72189

Thanks again!
*~!~* Angela
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Meep(:
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Sun Dec 12, 2010 3:37 pm
Meep(: says... · Sun Dec 12, 2010 3:37 pm
Hi Yuriiko! (:
Would you please review this short story for me? I'm rather clueless as to how to improve it and I've seen your helpful reviews :P
I'd be glad to repay the favour of reviewing any of your works, just inform me and I'll get straight to it! :D
Thank you very much!
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Emmzziee
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Sun Dec 12, 2010 4:05 pm
Emmzziee says... · Sun Dec 12, 2010 4:05 pm
Hiyyaahh!
It'd be totally awesome if you could review my poem :)
Only if you want to, of course. It is kind of depressing...
But I need to know if it sucks or not!
And I need to know if other people can get the gist of it, too :)
Here it is!
viewtopic.php?t=73129
THANK YOUUU! xxx
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SilentRain
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Mon Dec 13, 2010 3:59 am
SilentRain says... · Mon Dec 13, 2010 3:59 am
Hello!! So, you don't have to do this, it is a collection of poems I am considering sumiting to the YWLJ...

Click on the link for more details...

viewtopic.php?t=72999

Thanks,

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

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Yuriiko
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Sun Dec 19, 2010 1:07 pm
Yuriiko says... · Sun Dec 19, 2010 1:07 pm
I am done! yay!
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BenFranks
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Sun Dec 19, 2010 8:14 pm
BenFranks says... · Sun Dec 19, 2010 8:14 pm
Hullo. Mind having a butchers through this for me?

Cheers. :)




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Yuriiko
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Tue Dec 21, 2010 6:24 am
Yuriiko says... · Tue Dec 21, 2010 6:24 am
done! :3
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Yuriiko
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Sat Dec 25, 2010 8:49 am
Yuriiko says... · Sat Dec 25, 2010 8:49 am
no one wants to review from me? D:
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Lord Anzius
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Sun Dec 26, 2010 10:31 am
Lord Anzius says... · Sun Dec 26, 2010 10:31 am
Hullo :D I DO! :D I noticed that you still have your love for smilies intact. :D (not sure if you remember me though xD )
Would you review this piece for me? :)

Been working on it for a while it is the intro and first part of the first chapter (the whole of the first chapter will be like over 20 pages long so I'm just putting here the first part :P )
It is called Fear and it's General fiction and for now it's rated 12 + for language, though the following chapters will be from 12+ to 16+ to 18+ .

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69539.html#p763503

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