Hi Yuri, it's me again If it's possible, and if you have time, do you mind reviewing this chapter for me? Since you've read the prologue, I figured I might as well ask you :3 Don't worry, it's the last one! XD topic69697.html Thank you, Yuri!
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There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are. -W. Somerset Maugham
Would you mind reviewing the first chapter of my novel for me...? There are, like, nine chapters altogether, but don't worry! I don't expect you to review all of them. Well... unless you want to for some reason. I'd just like to hear your opinion on the first chapter because I want to get it as good as I can.