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Hello,You said you might review poetry so here you go! topic69750.html

Thanks if you review it, if not, thanks any way...

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Hi Yuri, it's me again :)
If it's possible, and if you have time, do you mind reviewing this chapter for me? Since you've read the prologue, I figured I might as well ask you :3
Don't worry, it's the last one! XD
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Thank you, Yuri!

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Done all!

Anyone else? :3
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Could you review this poem for me? viewtopic.php?t=69835

Thanks so much. ^^

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Done! :3
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Hey there, Yurii!

Would you mind reviewing the first chapter of my novel for me...? There are, like, nine chapters altogether, but don't worry! I don't expect you to review all of them. Well... unless you want to for some reason. :lol: I'd just like to hear your opinion on the first chapter because I want to get it as good as I can.

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Thanks so much!

xoxo Skins
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Done! :3

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Could you review this for me? Thanks a bunch.

A. S.




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Done, Calli.

Anyone else?
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Hey Yuri-chan(Huggles)

So I want a review and you might be able to help me out, I guess. So here's the link and try to be harsh. But only to the extent my heart could bear. :lol:

Link: The Road Not Taken-Chapter-1

Thanks in advance!

Loffle you always,
Shubhi
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Done. Anyone else?
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Hello agian! this is another poem, topic70088.html

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I'm done, SilentRain.

Anyone else? :3
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Well hello agian! Got anoter poem for you here post770000.html#p770000

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Hey,

I want one review. :)

Can you review this for me?

So if you don't know by now, it's Shubhi and Bluewaterlily's joint account and it's our novel we've co-written. It's just the prologue.

Thanks in advance!



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