Hey Skins! Could you review this:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic63329.html for me please? Someone else has done a critique, but I just wanted a few more people to read it and maybe comment. Thanks in advance!
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.
Hi! I've already gotten some reviews, but I've read your previous ones and they're really great. Would you might checking out my poems? I'm a total newbie in this sphere, and it actually has never occured to me that I could show my poems to anyone for a review.
I'd really like to know what I should work on and if I have any perspective or something (nothing professional, lol). Just.. if my poems are show-able for others^^
I wrote another poem! (because I know how much you like poetry) and wondered if you wanted to review it! Here's the link if you're interested. It's called Hate. viewtopic.php?t=63413
Thanks, Sarebear
Give a man a fish, he'll eat for a day. Teach a man to fish, he'll eat for a lifetime. Talk to a hungry man about fish, and you're a psychologist.
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
Hi!!! could you please reveiw the first chapter of my novel, Lone Wolf? it's kinda about love but has some action too... post689696.html#p689696 -fighta
