Shadow Valentine

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Calvin

The pain was starting to fade, and he could see who he was in the truck with now. He winced a little as Andrew started to wash the cuts on his wrists, but it wasn't as bad as what had happened before. The way she was using the water in the bottle, though, it looked like he wasn't the only one having issues.

Moreover, the fact that they'd all been thrown into the same truck suggested that he wasn't the only one the government - or whoever - was targeting at the school. Did that mean they were trustworthy? The possibility was hard for Calvin to get his head around. But if these people wanted him dead, they wouldn't be helping him. So he could trust them, at least for the time being.

He held up a hand, the cuts starting to heal over now. "I'll be alright... I think this thing lets me heal a little faster." Sitting up, he clutched his head for a few moments, "But that hurts like nothing you could imagine."
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mr. writer. you are going to need to lengthen your posts, or be killed. Sorry but one of them was like one sentence and had mistakes in it.
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As i looked out to see the woods I see a person like shadow running to the truck.I cover my good eye to see better and what was scary.




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**Starlet**

"Oh no," I whispered. The truck was gone," Crap, crap, crap. Okay Grim we need to-" I looked behind me and saw Grim running off somewhere," Oh great," Phelix lay on the ground next to me," Shit." I knelled down beside him and scanned the area frantically," I'm so sorry Phelix," I mumbled before turning my hands to blue and lifting him up in my arms," I need to start working out, this boy is heavy." Phelix cringed in pain and I could see the spots where I held him start to show signs of frostbite.
"Aww hell," I whispered.
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Grabbing ahold of DJ and the bald girl, Envie forced herself to focus hard. "Arie, you'll need to follow me. Alright?" She said wuickly. Arista nodded and Envie teleported. She missed her target and ended up outside the room, but what was worse was the splitting headache that sent her to the floor. Her vision flickered once, and then she was out cold.
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Phelix

Starlet swore as she saw that she had frozen me.

Slowly I began to thaw out. She waited impatiently. On the inside I was laughing. Really it scared me though. I was drenched as I finished defrosting.

"Well, if that never happens again, I'll be happy," I said. My hands felt numb still though, and looked a tad blue.

"We should go," Starlet said and motioned for me to follow.
"Where?" I asked.

*I think that things need to calm down a little bit now. We still need to go to school, and we can't just drive away in a truck. Sorry, but try to get a date. (Phelix is open, first to ask him gets him) and go to bed soon. Sure you can finish things up, but now, in order to stay alive, they need to blend in and not go smashing and teleporting their way around. I'll post more of my thoughts on the dt.*
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Grim

When I was running I saw the the shadow I saw was getting closer by the minute.Then the shadow I saw was only my shadow(my shadow is the really evil side of me).As I walk back to the truck i saw solder's lining up side by side.I say to myself "holy crap"and started to run as fast I can down the leaves with my shadow in side on me.




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Arista

Envie teleported with her again but as soon as they arrived to the place they needed, Envie collapsed, getting her hands to her head.

"Envie, are you ok?" Arie asked kneeling down beside her. But Envie just nodded. It was clear that Envie was not so fine. If her power, that was jsut moving things, had made her dizzy and gave her an incredible headache. HOw would it be teleporting people,e ven when she was knew.

"YOu have to get up, Envie" She said. "You'll be ok" So Arie helped her up and walked with her slowly.

"I can..." Envie started but Arie interrupted her.

"NO, we can't you told me to be careful and not draw too much attention to myself. So, to be hoest, teleporting here and there is not going to help, so let's just walk"
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**Starlet**

"We should go," I whispered, but Phelix was out again, pulled into one of his dreams again I suppose.The smell of flowers overwhelmed me. Again? I was pulled into the same meadow where Phelix lay on his back, looking up at the sky.
"Phelix, what are you doing?" He looked up at me and propped himself up on his elbows.
"What are you doing here?" He got up and grabbed my hands," You look horrible have you been crying." I looked down at my hands, my face filled with horror.
"Don't touch me!"
"Why not, what's wrong?" I looked down at my hands again.
"You're not burning, or getting frostbite, or getting the life sucked out of you."
"Why would that happen?" I sat down on the flowers and folded my knees up to my chest.
"My powers don't work here," I whispered, a bit giddy.
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check dt. I'll be gone until tommarrow around 2 (eastern states) so drag my character along with your stuff. I try to post as soon as possible.
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oh, i forgot. Power update on Phelix.

He can tap into other people senses. Hear and see etc. what anybody else can. Moreover, he can make them see hear etc. things that he wants. Which ties into the whole illusion thing.
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Ill be gone and i can super speed




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mr writer. You are no longer allowed to post on this story. Sorry.
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**Alrighty, then!**

Envie rolled over, picking up her cell phone and silencing the alarm. With a beep, the calendar popped up, reminding her that it was Valentine's Day. Great, her least favorite holiday. With a grumble, she sat up and threw her legs off the side of her bed. She ran her hand through her hair and slid off the mattress. In a blink she was across the room, picking up her brush. The tingling she'd felt two days ago was gone, but her power wasn't.

After she ran the brush through her hair, she teleported into the bathroom. She quickly brushed her teeth and scrubbed off her leftover make-up and re-applied the dark eyeliner and black eyeshadow. She teleported across the room to her dresser. Pulling on a tight-fitting All That Remains tee and her favorite pair of ripped jeans, she teleported to the door and calmly walked out, heading to breakfast.
Llama 1:"Shh! Do you hear that? That's the sound of forgiveness."
Llama 2:"That's the sound of people drowning, Carl!"
Llama 1:"That is what forgiveness sounds like; screaming and then silence."




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**Starlet**


I pulled on a pair of gloves and laced up my shoes. Valentine's day, how horrible, even though I did actually have a date, that Phelix kid. I sighed and applied my eye liner and fixed my shirt.
"Well, off to school," I sent a text to Phelix before walking out. People ran down the sidewalk to the gym as if nothing happened two days ago.
"Idiots," I whispered. Someone grabbed my hand and I instantly jerked back.
"It's just me," I turned around at the sound of Envie's voice and punched her in the arm.
"You scared me breathless." She laughed and drug me towards the school.
"Yeah, well, sorry." I shook my head and looked down.
"It's okay, what are you going to do about the dance?"
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