Shadow Valentine

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Hey.This is the plot. Hope you think it's cool

"The whole school was distributed the vaccine. It was supposed to leave them immune from the Dastel Influenza. But it did more than that. It turned the students into freaks."- President Joel.

The shot that was distributed gave the kids abnormal powers. They could do extraordinary things. Some turned good, others bad. The thing is, not everybody got it, and the ones that did immediately "disappeared"


Ok, basically this is about normal kids that get powers from a vaccine, and it was on valentines day. They can't tell anybody because the school is being patrolled and watched. If they "out" about their powers, they die. Also, they are in a boarding school for disturbed kids. Which means, criminals and psychos go there plus, you live sleep and work there. There's no escape.


Rules:

Keep powers under control. Meaning: nothing to powerful like complete mind control.

Keep pg-13 rated

All yws rules.

Have fun. This is a great way to even make the character you and try to pretend that you got powers and what you would do with them. Obviously the group of people that have powers know each other. And naturally they will break into a group of the "good" and the "bad"


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I hope you join, the more the better.
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Hm.. I'd like to call a spot!

Name: Andrew Calahan (Actually a girl)

Age: 16

Personality: Bright, out-spoken but doesn't really speak much. Witty, and clever.

Appearence: http://www.wallpaperez.net/wallpaper/be ... rl-384.jpg

but her eyes change from blue, to green, to red, to gold.

Power: She can control elements according to her eye color. blue-water, green-earth, red-fire, and gold - wind but she prefers only water and fire and uses earth and wind very rarely.

Other: Up for love/friendship!
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Interesting..
I claim a spot for a girl.




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Name: Calvin Rivers

Age: 17

Personality: Calvin was put in this kind of school for a very good reason - he has a few fairly strong psychoses. He is intensely paranoid, and also prone to wild mood swings. While he can almost seem normal in his calmer periods, he will react to just about anything in a more extreme way than most people - minor irritations can send him into a frenzy, something good happening will trigger a period of mania.

Appearance: http://cinder-ashx.deviantart.com/art/F ... -112151174 But without the thing on his left eye.

Power: Bone manipulation. This can range from using his own bones as weapons to altering the skeletal structure of others. However, this second aspect of his ability requires him to be in contact with that person, and it causes him a great deal of pain to use.

Other: Up for love
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just so you know. It's not an asylum. It's just a boarding school for troubled teens.
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ok, here's my character

Name: Phelix Stark

Age:16

Personality: He is friendly to most people but he does not always like them. He is not naturally violent until somebody else starts a fight and then he is. He is outgoing and funny.

Appearance: Long black wavy hair. Pale skin and yellowish eyes. He is mid height and muscled.

Power: psionic ability to cast illusions, causing people to see, hear, touch,smell, or taste things which do not actually exist.

Other: Up for love
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This sounds cool!


Name:Arista Lowell "Arie"

Age:17

Personality:Very outgoing and happy, quick to anger but still patient. Incredibly intelligent and clever and has incredible street smarts. She is very compassionate but if she does something good, she will spend hours bragging about that. She enjoys silence as much as making others happy.BUt...
she is quite rebellious.

Appearance:blonde hair and hazel eyes with flawless white skin, not pale but beautifully white. Her face a bit round but her eyes really pop because they're really beauriful. She is very skinny kind of has a supermodel body.
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Power:telekinesis, so she basically moves stuff with her mind

Other:up for love and friendship.
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Name: Gwen Rivers


Age: 17


Personality: One of the "quiet kids" but is far from normal. Had a problem as a sort of "stalker" that got her stuck in this place. Doesn't like conversation, she finds it pointless. Would rather gain all her knowledge through watching and learning on her own.


Appearance: Long died black hair that usually covers her face. She has her nose pierced (but nothing weird like a bull ring or anything, just a small silver stud). Dresses "emo". Doesn't like t-shirts or tank tops (or shoes for that matter). Typically small hooded sweatshirts and tight jeans.


Power: invisibility, but she has a hard time controlling it (will randomly dissapear usually due to emotional stress)


Other: Up to stalk/love you, but doesn't deal so well with returned feelings.
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(I'm in!)

Name: Envie (pronounced like "envy") Desson

Age: 17

Personality: Cold-hearted and seemingly uncaring, she puts up a tough front with her "I'm head bitch" attitude. She was sent to the school for attempting to poison her father. However, to those who can get past her outer shell, she's a devoted ally and friend, ready to do anything for them. She loves music like Marilyn Manson, CombiChrist, Hollywood Undead, All That Remains, and Slipknot.

Appearance: Long black hair with blue tips. Her eyes are blue (like sapphires).


Power: She can teleport herself, others, or objects from place to place.


Other: Up for love/friendship
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Name: Alexis B.


Age: 17


Personality: Doesn't really trust anyone. She is very outspoken, and will often tell you how she feels even if it hurts your feelings. She is hateful at times, and doesn't care what people think about her. She loves music like Marilyn Manson, CombiChrist, and Hollywood Undead.


Appearance: http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/6706/jennylewis7eo.jpg


Power: She has the ability to turn into anyone she wants, after having physical contact.


Other: She is kind of hard to be friends with, but willing to go for love/friendship.
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My second storybook! I'm on a winning streak. :smt005 Okay, yeah I'm joining this one too!

Name: Starlet Mansion
Age: 16
Personality: Quiet and mysterious, she doesn't speak unless spoken to. Has a bit of a mean streak; it's easy to get on her bad side, and once you're there it's hard to get out. She has this sort of alter ego, the bad side of her, that comes out at the weirdest times and causes trouble for everyone around, but other than that is really nice, sweet, and a bit shy
Power: If someone touches her exposed skin without protection they burn, freeze, or get the life sucked out of them. She controls which happens.
Other: Up for love.
Apperance:http://media.photobucket.com/image/emo+girls/Jaymi_Lessthan3/emo_nd_scene_girl_____.jpg?o=80
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Name: Lucy Antoinette


Age: 17


Personality: Lucy is very skittish, and paranoia plagues her. She constantly thinks people are out to get her, and chooses solitude. When she developed her powers, the paranoia heightened, and she believes everyone is trying to kill her. In turn, she tries to kill anyone she thinks her enemy.


Appearance: Lucy's hair is completely shaved. When the vaccination was starting to take affect, she lost it and pulled out large chunks of hair. Her nails are also always bitten down to the skin from nervous habit. She is abnormally skinny, choosing not to eat any food they give her, and survives off of water and food she finds off the floor.


Power: She has the ability to read people's thoughts. But to her, it sounds like voices in her head, so she doesn't know how to concentrate them, and she only hears the hatred in people's minds, since she doesn't know how to control it.


Other: Deep down she wants someone to trust, since her parents shoved her in the Boarding School thinking her insane, but due to her paranoia, she finds it hard to give anyone a chance.




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Name: Darrin Jason Evans (DJ)

Age: 18

Personality: DJ has extreme anger management issues, and has been taking treatments for it. His protective instincts are also another thing that gets him in trouble, and at times, almost killed. He's like an over protective, ticking time bomb. The slighting thing could set him off.

Appearance: DJ isn't sickly buff, but he definately has some muscle mass to him. He still has a farmer's tan, definite muscles, green eyes, and dirty blonde hair, which is often hidden by a hat when he's outside.

Power: Absorbs any substance, if he feels like it, that he comes in contact with and uses it as his body. With some substances, such as cement, steele, or titanium, he gains strength, and his others, such as water, he absorbs damage.

Other: Up for love and he was sent to the school after almost murdering a fellow student at his last school for knocking his little sister to the ground.
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ok, maybe one more person and we can start
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Well... I'm going to finish NaNoWriMo today so I may as well join! Count me in. :D
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