Shadow Valentine

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Melissa caught the words of the girl whose name was Andrew.
Melissa tried sitting up, "I don't think you should do that. Set fire to this thing and we'll all blow up."
Melissa had an idea in her head but pondered on it, letting the others say their ideas.
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**Starlet**

I gave a nervous laugh and looked at Melissa then at Andrew.
"Well, we could melt a hole in the side of the truck, and then everyone can make a run for it." Everyone looked around the truck.
"Good idea," DJ said," lets do it."
"Wait," Andrew yelled," we still need defenses, Star is one of them."
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I want in

Name:Grim (Boy)

Age:15

Personality: Always looking around for something, EVIL and
if some ones rear him he will rim the guts out and send them to hell :twisted:
Appearance: Wears black jeans, black shirt,black jacket,
has red eye on his left Eye.

Power: He was the power to bind time and space but has a hard time doing so

Other: Don't always trust him




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Nick101 wrote:Melissa caught the words of the girl whose name was Andrew.
Melissa tried sitting up, "I don't think you should do that. Set fire to this thing and we'll all blow up."
Melissa had an idea in her head but pondered on it, letting the others say their ideas.

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When Phelix looked at her, confused, she shook her head. "Figure it out, and do what you can. Come on Arie." Envie grabbed the girl and hugged her. Focusing on the inside of the truck, she sent the tingling into Arista and then let it flow. They apeared in the truck which had a few more people in it.

"Holy!" One person shouted.

"Why the hell did you bring another person in here?" Starlet asked.

"She's going to drive for us. I figured teleporting into here was better than out there in front of everybody and there grandmothers." Envie shifted to uncram her head from the ceiling. "Not to mention, she was my test subject. The evacuation is a go. Let's get you guys out of here. We need a distraction, too. That's partly why I brought Arista, here."
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Nick101 wrote:Melissa caught the words of the girl whose name was Andrew.
Melissa tried sitting up, "I don't think you should do that. Set fire to this thing and we'll all blow up."
Melissa had an idea in her head but pondered on it, letting the others say their ideas.
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**Starlet**

An idea popped into my head.
"Where's that Phelix guy?" Andrew scratched her head and looked up.
"I left him inside." I put my hands on the wall of the truck and burned a small hole through.
"What the hell," the bald girl whispered. I jumped out and heard a string of protest behind me.
"I'll be right back! I have an idea." I ran off into the school with my hands a dull grey.
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Grim was looking around the school and he starts to get that feeling that someone was there. He turns around slowly to find that there was some of the governments top spy's spying on grim.At this time grim has pointed guns at him, But he had a idea to destroyed them. He run like HELL :o .




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Phelix

The girls shape faltered and disappeared
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I closed my eyes and shuttered. Finally, I pulled myself together and focused. I had a power too right? A memory of flowers invaded my mind, and suddenly i was standing in a field of flowers. The smell of pollen tingled in my nostrils, and I walked through the flowers slowly. It was beautiful, but it seemed fake. It felt like i was walking through a memory, or a creation of my own imagination.

Out of nowhere, people appeared in the field. That same girl and the others. They looked at me crazily.

"What the heck are you doing here? You can't teleport too can you?" One of them asked. It seemed like they weren't seeing what I was seeing.

"I-" I began and the field disappeared. I was standing on pavement now. "I guess I followed you somehow, I don't know what's going on!" I stammered.

The girls looked scared and angry. I smiled, focusing on a picture of the sky, swirling clouds and blue.

Suddenly, they screamed. It appeared that we were all floating in the sky. I laughed and it disappeared.

"But I think I may be of service to you." I said.

*I implied that somebody can follow through your teleport if they walk where you just disappeared. I can edit though if you don't like the idea. Also, I wrote this before that girl went looking for me. Sorry but you'll have to come back after not finding me or something.*
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**No, that's a great idea! It'll help with the evac.**

Envie stared at Phelix for a moment. Man this day was weird, but there were more important things to worry about. Mainly the girl that had just burned a hole through the side of the truck.

"What is she thinking?" Envie cursed. The gap in the truck was a thin, only big enough for Starlet to fit through. Several soldiers rushed by it and she jumped back. "Time to get out of here. Calvin, you're hurt, so I'm taking you first. Phelix, you said you followed me after I teleported?" Phelix nodded. "Alright, then whoever wants to, follow me." Envie grabbed Calvin and teleported. They arrived in her room and Envie helped Calvin onto the bed. Not a second later, Andrew appeared. "I'll be right back." Envie said and teleported back to the truck.

"Next!" She cried as she reappeared.
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Llama 1:"Shh! Do you hear that? That's the sound of forgiveness."
Llama 2:"That's the sound of people drowning, Carl!"
Llama 1:"That is what forgiveness sounds like; screaming and then silence."




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**somehow like Jumper, if you've ever watch that movie. Cool!!**

Arista " Arie"
The experience was quite disturbing but awesome at the same time. She appeared in the truck with a bunch of people, people she knew thankfully. There were so many of her friends here but she had no idea why they were here.
"What are you doing here?" She asked, trying to clear her mind of everything.

"We don't know" Andrew said a bit exasperated. " What's your power anyways?"

"Telekinesis" Arie answered as she moved to the back of the truck where she got a glimpse of the driver and the steering wheel.

"Hold on" She said, but even before she finished the truck gave a violent u turn.

"What the he..." Star started saying. But that was fun, Arie loved her power.
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**Starlet**


I rounded a corner and ran into another guy, he had one red eye and wore all black.
"What the hell is up with these collisions," I whispered. The guy looked at me with his eyes slanted," Who are you?"
"Grim, who are you?" I looked around Grim and saw the men in uniform rounding the corner.
"Explain, later, run, now!" I grabbed his sleeve, careful not to touch skin, and ran. I drug him into the girl's bathroom.
"Hey what the-" I shushed him and walked over to Phelix. Grim walked over and grabbed me by the arm.
"I was about to ask you a-," I turned my hands red," Ow! What the hell?" I shook my head.
"Don't touch me, pick up this guy." I pointed to Phelix.
"No way, you are crazy!" I turned my hands grey and held them up.
"You do not want to know what this feels like." He looked at me, then at Phelix and picked him up," Good boy, let's go." We ran out of the bathroom and back to the truck.
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Lol LoVeLeSs thats funny!

Andrew

I followed Envie and gasped to find myself in her room. "Thats cool!" I said grinning. I walked over to where Calvin lay on the bed and knelt next to him. "We should wash his cuts, anyone have any water?"

Envie tossed me a water bottle and I flicked my hand, the water shooting the cap off. I stopped the streaming water with another flick of my hand, and slowly led it to Calvin's cuts. "Ok Calvin," I said concentrating. "This might sting..."
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Arista "Arie"

It was just a work of her mind, she just had to keep the truck moving, no matter what.

"Have you ever driven before?" She ehard somene say.

"Try doing it with your mind" She said mockingly, actually annoyed.
She was trying to do her best. It was difficult when she oculdn't see what she was moving. Arie jsut had a picture on her mind, a picture of what the car's controls might be.

When's she getting me out of here. Arista thought.
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As Grim was running he saw that they froze and them he knows that he has powers. :smt003



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