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Andrew

I stood next in line for a vaccine, feeling uneasy. I didn't particularly hate shots but I didn't get a kick out of them either.

"Ms.Calahan, you're next!" A nurse said, nudging me forward. Slowly, I sat in a chair and looked away as the needle plunged into my arm. Quickly, I got up and strode away from the needles, feeling even more uneasy. My insides seemed to almost quiver, but I ignored it.

"Hey Andrew," a voice called out to me.
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**Starlet**

"Ms.Mansion!" I rolled my eyes and looked at the nurse that gave me my shots. I folded my arms and drug myself over to where she stood.
"What the hell do you want? I already got my shot." She rolled her eyes at my disrespectful outburst and took my by the sleeve.
" Listen, aren't you a nurse assistant." I rolled my eyes.
"A candy stripier, yeah." She clapped her chubby hands together.
"Great 'cause I need you to help hold down these children. They're squirming more than a fish out of water." I rolled my eyes and grabbed the first boy by the shoulders.
"Listen kid," I mumbled. I could practically feel my anger rising," You don't want to be here, and neither do I so let's just-"
"Ow! That's hot! Ow!" The boy in the seat yelled out in pain. I pulled my arms off his shoulder's and saw two giant burn marks. The nurse, nurse Jenny, starred at the boy in surprise.
"How did...how did that happen." I shook my head and looked at my hands.
" I g-g-got to go." I ran for the door but I ran into someone on the way.
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Andrew

I turned at the sound of my name but saw no one and a second later someone slammed into me. "Ow!" I cried and looked to see Scarlet, her face pale and her hands shaking. "Scarlet," I said putting a hand on her shoulder "whats wrong?"
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**Starlet

I looked up to see Andrew's worried face. I stood up and took a step away from her.
"A-a-Andrew! I d-didn't mean to do it I mean...I don't know what happened." I grabbed her hands while tears formed in my eyes, which was rare 'cause I've never been known to cry, not in public anyway,"Please, you have to help me." She jerked back in pain and I looked to see that burn marks formed on her hands, just like on the boys shoulder.
"Star what the hell?" I looked at my hands, which were returning to normal from their dull red color.
"Oh no," I whispered, my voice filled with agony.
"Starlet, what did you do?" I looked around me to see that a crowd had formed. Tears rolled down my cheek faster. What's wrong with me?
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Andrew

I looked at my hands, which were beginning to scar. Scar looked at the crowd of people gathering, and I quickly grabbed her wrist and pulled her from the room, down the hall and into the one person bathroom, locking the door behind us.

"Scar whats going on?!" I asked, trying to ignore the pain in my hands.
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**Starlet**

I shook my head and put my hands on my head, away from Andrew and backed up against the back wall.
"I don't know. I'm sorry!" She walked over and tried to comfort me but I held out my hands in defense.
"Don't touch me, please. " She looked at me for 10 very long seconds before taking up space beside a sink.
"What's going on Star? Why did I get burned." I looked at my hands then a the floor.
"I don't know. I just touched the boy and he burned..then I grabbed your hands and you burned."
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Last edited by EmiSukotto16 on Sun Nov 29, 2009 9:26 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Llama 1:"Shh! Do you hear that? That's the sound of forgiveness."
Llama 2:"That's the sound of people drowning, Carl!"
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Andrew

I frowned, I hated seeing Scar like this, so scared and upset. I sighed and my hands and put them down at my sides forcefully trying to not look at them. "Its ok Scar I know you didnt mean to. I just wish I kne-" The water in the sink suddenly started to spurt out forcefully. I stepped back shocked. "Scar?"

"What?" she asked obviously having seen it too.

"Did you do that?"

"No."

I stepped toward it, my hand out and flicked my hand upward. The water stopped and my mouth dropped. I turned to Scar but felt a giant flash of pain sear through my head. I cried out and collasped.

After a minute, it left aburptly. I stood and looked at myself in the mirror and my face paled at what I saw. "S-s-Scar," I said "my eyes are-" I couldnt say it. I couldn't say that my dark chocolate brown eyes were now an unbelieveably bright blue.
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**Starlet**

I stood up and went over to Andrew. I looked in the mirror and gasped when my eyes fell upon hers.
"Y-your eyes! What..and the water.." I burst into a fresh stream of tears. This was so unlike me.
"What's happening," the voice was neither mine nor Andrew's. I turned around and a tall skinny girl was starring at us. She obviously saw the water incident.
"Aww hell," I whispered before backing back up against the wall.
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**Envie**

Envie hoped she'd be able to get to her room before anything else could go wrong, but as she turned onto a deserted corridor her whole body suddenly began to tingle and numb out. When the feeling in her legs disappeared, she lost balance and fell to the floor.

"What the-?" Her head began to scream in pain. She began to jerk and writhe on the cold stone floor. Just as she went to scream her body felt freezing cold, her sight went black and there was a loud rushing noise in her ears, like she was standing in the middle of a tornado. It stopped a quickly as it happened, and the pain ebbed. She opened her eyes and found herself in middle of the foyer oustide the auditorium where a crowd was staring at her. She slowly got up, looking around wondering what the heck had just happened. When she straightened, her body began to tingle and it happened again. "No!" She shouted as the cold, dark, and wind captured her again. Then she appeared in a bathroom, where two girls were standing over a sink. One flicked her finger and the water turned off.

"What's happening?" She asked. She was shivering, worried she'd disappear again. It was a question that included her and the chick with the water trick.

"I-I don't know." One of the girls said. Her eyes were a brilliant blue. The other was looking at her hands like they were ready to catch fire.

"How'd you do that with the sink?" Envie asked, wrapping her arms around herself, still worrying about staying where she was.

"I don't know."

Envie was about to ask the other girl if she was okay, but the tingling entered her body. "Please, no! Not again!" She screamed just before she disappeared.
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Llama 2:"That's the sound of people drowning, Carl!"
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*Starlet**

I looked at Envie and then at Andrew while pulling my knees up to my chest.
"Hell, hell, hell," I banged my head on the wall and chanted those words over and over again. Andrew's new blue eyes pierced my heart.
"Cut it out, Star," she yelled but I just shook my head kept banging it on the wall while chanting something else.
"This can't be happening, this can't be happening." Envie looked at me, I could feel her eyes on me along with Andrew's. I stared up at them, my eyes red rimmed and puffy.
"Now, Star, it'll be okay," Andrew walked over and put her hand under my chin," everything will be-"
"No don't-"
"Ow!" She jerked back and looked at her now red hands," What the-"
"I told you not to! Don't touch me!" I shrunk back further in the corner and cried into my hands," I didn't try to do it. I swear..."
Last edited by LovelessSummer on Sun Nov 29, 2009 10:19 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Arista "Arie"
While she was talking to Calvin something strange started to happen. Her head started swirling nonstop, she began to get dizzy and for some reason she felt this strange tingling all through her body.
"I don't feel good" She said to him her head spinning more rapidly by the second, until all she saw was a spinning world.
"Calvin" She screamed, but nothing came. From a hard effort she made, she saw Calvin having the same problem as she did.
All of a sudden she began running, she didn't even know where until she bumped into someone. Her head was still spinning but for some reason it was creating this huge force around her that it seemed to be suffocating her.

"Arie!" She heard a voice call. "Arie!" but she couldn't answer, she felt the force that her mind was creating, getting stronger and stronger, keeping her from breathing.

"I-I-I" But she couldn't finish the sentence, she was gasping. And all of a sudden, her head stopped spinning, but it was so rushed that it gave her nausea. But something was not right. The things around her were moving, lifting up in the air, flying all over. And the force was getting just stronger.
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Phelix

The girl looked away and strode awkwardly past me. I shrugged and moved on. My stomach was getting really annoying now. It was like something sharp was growing inside it and was puncturing all my organs. I walked around the auditorium with my hands above my head trying to ease the pain.

I saw that some of the other kids were looking uncomfortable too. I saw a girl scream and fall on the floor. A boy next to her was moaning in pain. The nurses appeared scared. A couple kids fainted and the room started getting even louder.

What was happening to me?


I stumbled over to the girl that was on the floor. She looked like she was in a load of pain. The other kid didn't acted like he couldn't see me. His eyes were glazed over and oblivious to the world.

"Are you OK?" I asked and stumbled back as my stomach surged with pain. Neither answered. I walked past them across the room to a girl who was angrily yelling at somebody because they touched her. The kid who had touched her held his hand like it was on fire.

I fell to the ground now, in agony. Voices were murmuring in my head. Shapes were whizzing through my brain.

Shapes Textures Smells Tastes


*somebody please interact with Phelix. I gave everybody a chance.
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Andrew

I jumped back as Star burned me again." I didn't try to do it. I swear..." She stuttered. I nodded, "I know you wouldn't Star. God this is so freaky! I want to know whats going on with us NOW!" I pounded my fist on the floor.

Suddenly, a giant pillar of rock shot out of the floor a few feet away from my hand. I gaped at it, and winced as the pain shot through my head again, but not as painful.

"A-Andrew," Star stuttered again. I looked at her, my mouth still open. "Y-you're eyes are green now."

I felt my heart nearly stop as I raced to the mirror and found my eyes really were a startling bright grass green.

"What is happening?!" I choked.
I know that you believe you understand what you think I said, but I'm not sure you realize that what you heard is not what I meant. - Robert McCloskey

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