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Leeanna-Done.

Anyone else?
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Will you please please read my story? :)
Here's the link to the first part:
viewtopic.php?t=55115
And here's to the second part:
topic55358.html
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Captain.Classy-Done.

:elephant: any more?
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anybody, yoohoo?
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I'll even dance...scratch that, I'll sing!
horrible scratchy tone: and she wears short skirts and I wear tee shirts, she's cheer captain and I'm on the bleachers...
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Enjoy reading this

topic51881.html
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Can you please review a chapter of my story? It's called Demon's Deal, and its Fantasy fiction (Sort of). I only have what's either going to be the first or the second chapter up, since I haven't written the prologue and/or Chapter 1 yet, but I have all the important missing information at the bottom. :D

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Young gun- Done.
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You're really quick, Pink ^^ Mind doing a review for me?

If you're looking for a rundown of the beginning, I can't give you one, though -.-" It's a bit complicated, so I hope you can work with what I give you xD

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56191.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56193.html

Thanks! Just drop me a line if you need a review ;)

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Binkatong- Done.

:) thanks Shina, I'll review yours next.
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Let me know what you thought of these:

topic56116.html
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angels-symphony: Done
Young gun: Done

Anyone else?? :D
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>.< anyone?

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Hey pink, it's me again :D Thanks so much for your reviews, I've taken on board all that you've said and have went back and re-written my previous chapters. I've also posted up chapter 8. Hope you can take a look at it when you can and give me your opinion on the improvements that I've made on the other chapters. Thanks so much x

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56650.html chapter 8

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*coco-Done!

That was my 101th review. Wow :D
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Hey. You seem very eager to review. I'm new to this site and have only gotten reviews from one person. Could you help me out? My piece is romantic fiction and is called
Making Rain: Molly and Adam. I would GREATLY appreciate it:)



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