Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]

Mollytate: Done!

Alright, does anyone else need a review?

Hey Pink!
Can you please review this for me?
Is called A demon sits behind me at school.

Pudin-Done!

I still have time for more
Anyone else?

Title: Adjusting to the Dark- Chapter 2
action/adventure fiction
topic56883.html

It's not very exciting I'm afraid. >.< I'm trying to edit it.

Pretty crazy- Done~

More more more

Hey Pink?!

Thanks for the last review!

Can you please review this? it's the edited version.

Thanks!

Pink!

Well, here's mine : topic57103.html
Could you tell me how to draw the first one better. Any suggestion's appreciated.

~Lava

Pudin-Done!
Lavabubblingout-Done!


I'm ready for more so keep em' coming!

Hi, would you mind reviewing this?

Ignorance is Never Bliss: Prologue

No kind words, no harsh words, just honest truth.

Thanks!


~Jasmine Bells~
Peace, Love, Writing, Insanity and Chocolate

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Hey there!
I see you wrote that you may not review non-fiction! Well, I thought I'd have a go at asking any'oo -- worth a bash, eh?
Anyway! If you love humour or comedy or satirical writing have a trot through my column-based book extract, which I have the link for somewhere... *digs around bag*
Ah-ha!
Here y'are -> topic57293.html
Tear it apart if you like!
Thankies!
Ben.

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Hey pink, it's me again I really appreciated your review. I was quite nervous to write my next chapter because I realised I hadn't really put some drama in like you and a lot of my other reviewers mentioned, and I kinda felt quite pressurised to put some drama in. Anyway, It's been difficult but I've finally put up chapter 9, so I hope you can take a look at it when you can and give me your opinion on whether it's enough, if it's not I may stop writing as it's difficult to keep readers interested in a long story. Anyway, thanks so much x

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56650.html chapter 8

*coco

'Ullo Pink!
Unfortunately, to your despair, I've come anlong with another request for a bit'a humourus non-fiction. (In a slightly different context than before). Okay, so this is a piece I wrote in December and it's part of the preface to my column-based rant of a book "Earth and It's contents"
Well, I'd ardently admire your thoughts of it. (Bit'a Pride and Prej language for you there! XD). Here's the link... *Takes off hat and pulls out a small piece of paper and attempts to write what is written*
topic57771.html
Woo-hoo!
Any'oo, enjoy what you can.
It's called: (E&iC) Dictionary [Part One]
Cheers! Ben.

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*Coco-Done!

Thanks for the request guys, keep em' coming