Hey, Pink! (I just realized I haven't talked to you for a while. Why is that? Alas, the problem shall soon be addressed on your wall.) I have entered yet another contest, and deadline passed or no I need some review. Some good reviews. Some great reviews. Some reviews bordering on, and then surpassing, epic. Some Pink-style reviews.
So to get to the point, can you please review this for me? Thanks in advance.
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
Could you please take a look at this: topic75972.html ? There's the other half of that chapter posted as well, though you don't have to look at it. Only if you're interested.
You're, like, so totally cool, so I want to request a review. (Hey, that kinda rhymed.) I've finished editing A Shot of Arrogance, and then I thought I'd be all rebellious and post the new first chapter here on YWS. Basically, I'd appreciate it if you could review it for moi.
Can you please do me a favor and review my new entry? topic77210.html It's in " General Fiction " because YWS currently doesn't have a thriller genre. I really appreciate it! Thanks! - Jojo
Hey, Im rather new as you may be able to tell by the post count. I have two nearly finished chapters sitting about if you're bored. Its literary fiction. Its an in medias res opening so it may make less sense as two chapters standing on their own. But yeah if you're bored take a look.
