hey Shear! I need reviews despertly, especially since this is for a contest, The deadline is June 8th, but it won't take me long to edit, so just if you reviewed it on June 8th, that'd be fine... *sigh* I am so sorry for the short notice!!!
Dramallama, I don't think the link is working. Also, it's past the 8th - Sorry for not getting to this in time but if you still want a review, let me know.
Kagi - Done!
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There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are. -W. Somerset Maugham
I was wondering if you could please take a look at this. It's my entry for the big contest and needs simply oodles of work so please feel free to sharpen your teeth on it.
TITLE: 2 | Wicked Medicine (a scene from my novel, the Labyrinth Experiment) GENRE: Science Fiction (though borderline Fantasy in some parts, its more like Star Wars then Star Trek, if that makes sense) LINK: topic82614.html
The first scene: topic82336.html (You do not need to read this for Wicked Medicine to make sense but it would help should you choose to read on. Also it's fairly short, 521 words, and you do not have to review if you don't want to.)
Thanks!
.:~|The Red Ink Emporium!|~:. "What's the point of being grown-up if you can't act childish sometimes?"
It's describing a scene-I'm testing my ability on description and creating a picture/image using words. So it might not be too interesting but hopefully you're ok with that,
Thanks and I'll review any time!
Got YWS?
If, when you mean to type yes you type yws, you know you belong.
Finally... Other reviews, I'll be happy to take them but it might take me a while to get to them. If you don't mind waiting two weeks or so (Since I'm on vacation) then go ahead and post a link!
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are. -W. Somerset Maugham
I am working on a novel and, although my first chapter got plenty of decent reviews, I don't think my second one will draw quite as much critical attention. Please ( if you have time ofcourse) review it!
Its a tale depicting my MC's last few weeks before dying of rabies.
Thanks for the reviews, I'll try to get to them soon but you'll have to wait! =D
Also, I'm going to be closing this thread for now until I get things straight and have some more time. Please don't request any more reviews until I reopen this again. ^__^
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are. -W. Somerset Maugham
