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Colt:

Colt pulled her closer looking around at everyone that was there. "I'm not sure how long we'll stay here." He said looking at her and then past glaring at a guy there.

"Why?" She grinned.

"To many single guys watching you." He replied pulling her closer.

Senra:

Senra moved closer to Peter. "Is it just me or are we being watched?" She asked.
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I grinned, "you are."

She wriggled uncomfortably, "I don't like that."

"Why not?"

She shrugged, "I just like being with you, thats enough for me."


Annie

"We could move to another club?" I suggested.

"Guys will still stare at you anyways."
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Colt:

"I don't know why." She smield.

"Because your beautiful." He said kissing her forehead. "Amazingly beautiful."


Senra:

Senra sighed, "I love you, Peter." She said softly. "So much."

"I love you too, honey." He smiled back. She felt so comfotable and amazing in his arms.
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Annie

I smiled, "nobody out there is near as handsome as you."

"Nobody's near as perfect as you."

"I'm far from perfect."

"I must just have really low standards then?" he was mocking her.

"Yes you do."

To shut me up he kissed me.
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Colt:

Colt still couldn't believe she thought so lowly of herself, but he wasn't about ot let her get away with that. He held her close after pulling away from the kiss. "I love you, Annie. And no matter what you think your perfect in my eyes." He stroked her jaw gently with his finger and smiled. "Now, to another subject.

"Like what?" SHe asked looking up at him. He smiled and shrugged.

"I don't know, how about what we will do after we leave here?" He asked. That stupid ring was burning a hole in his pocket and he wanted to ask her so bad, but now wasn't the time either.
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Annie

I shrugged, "back to the hotel until tomorrow and then home?"

He held me tighter, "home sounds very good."

I looked up at him curiously, he looked nervous, "i'm not going to leave you again."

He looked startled and then blurted, "will you marry me?"
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Colt:

Colt slammed his mouth closed and stuttered to restore what he had done. "S-sorry, you don't have to answer that." he said. "Want some water? I'll go get some." Colt's stomach was twisted into so many knots as he turned and took off towards where there were drinks. He kept a tight eye on here to make sure no one hurt or touched her, but he was more jittery then a teenage boy on his first date. Hekicked himself over and over agian. Why did he do that, why did he ruin that!

"Stupid stupid stupid stupid!" He growled at himself. "I wanted that to be perfect!"
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Annie

I paused on the dance floor, what had he just said? I hadn't heard anything. I started to follow him but somebody intercepted me.

"Hey pretty lady," the mans voice said.

I scowled up at him, "hi, can you get out of the way please?"

"Don't worry about him, come dance with me."

"Sorry I'll pass."

But much to my dismay he took my arm and around my waist and started dancing with me. I struggled and looked around hopefully but Colt was nowhere in sight.

"Let go please," I pleaded. "I-"

He crushed his lips against mine. AFter the inital shock subsided I started to fight, pushing against his chest and as much as I could. Finally he was suddenly picked up and shoved away from me. Suddenly released I stumbled and fell to the ground. "Ow," I groaned but quickly scurried out of the way.

Senra pulled me to my feet, "are you okay?"

I nodded. I turned around looking for Colt. He was struggling with the guy. I ran over and tried to pry him off. "Colt!" i hollared. "Stop!"

He stepped away from the guy and held me tight against him. "I'm sorry," he said. "About everything."

"Let's go," I suggested.

On the bus I stayed leaning against him, "When we were in the club what did you say before you ran off?"

"You didn't hear me?"

I shook my head.

"Oh...good."
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"Good?" She asked. "I want to know why you ran off."

"It was nothing but a stupid comment." He smiled. "Maybe we will be able to laugh about it one day?" He smiled.

"I want to know what it's about." She frowned watching her.

"don't worry about it." He said softly. "Just don't worry about it. We should go to the park before we leave." He smiled.
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Annie

I sighed, I was going to worry about it anyways. But the park sounded like a good idea. "Sound's good." I said. My stomach growled, "mind if we stop somewhere to get something to eat?"

He shook his head, "not in the least."

We were silent again, he seemed nervous but about what I hadn't the faintest idea.
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Colt:

Colt smiled and pulled up in a nice resturant and got them some good seats. They sat down and ate but he wasn't able to eat as much as normal. He wanted so bad to ask, but he would wait for the park. It would be more romantic then a thrown together dinner.

"Now what?" She asked looking at him after they finished the food.

"Come on, let's go for a walk." he smiled wrapping his arma round her waist an leading her towards the park. The ring was burning in his pocket as they walked. He saw a nice little gazeebo on the water, and it was lit just right. He led her to it and smiled.

"It's beautiful out here." She smiled. HE nodded and then turned her to him getting down on one knee and producing the ring.

"Will you marry me, Annie?" He asked waiting for her response.
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Annie

For a breif moment my head shut down, nothing crossed my mind but "will you marry me" Then everything jump started working at super high speeds.

I thought of him, and I thought of me.

I thought of the first time I met him, and I thought of the first time I thought I'd lost him. I was...

I wasn't anything without him.

"I will," I breathed in a barely audable whisper.
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Colt:

Colt could feel his body tense at her silence. Was she going to say no. Was he going to lose her forever?

"I will." She barely said. He jumped up and scooped her up spinning her around and kissing her.

"THANK YOU!" HE grinned kissing her again and holding her close.
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Annie

I smiled and laughed spinning around in his arms feeling happier than ever.

"It's nothing," I assured him, "No reason for you to freak out."

He laughed and set me back on my feet, "I was terrified you'd say no."

I smiled and kissed him, "you don't know me very well then."

"I hope I do, it's just common fear."
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"Your pausing didn't help any." He said softly. "You scared me to death. That's one thing I don't think you'll ever get about someone else."

"Well I said yes, so there." She grinned. He kissed her holding her close.

"I know, and i"m the happiest person alive." He grinned.
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