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All right, welcome to my newest storybook. I've been saving up for quite sometime so the least you could do is read through this ;)

The Idea --

You are a teenager, anywhere between the ages of 14 and 18, growing up in Chicago.

You don't have magical powers, you are a completely normal teenager. You have friends, you fall in love, you fall out of love, you make mistakes.

There is no set plot for this StoryBook. It is, quite simply, life. And as life is unpredictable, there can't be much of a set plot.

Occasionally a character may hold a party or something. The general games like Seven Minutes in Heaven, or Spin the Bottle may be played, or other such options.

Your Job --

Create a character. No more than three, please. (Unless you get permission from me.) Tell me what he or she is into. Are they happy? Are they angsty? Are they smart? Do they do drugs? Have they had sex? This is rated 'R' for a reason. It may give you a chance to explore a new type of character.

Rules --

-Have fun!!-
-No God Modding-
-No More than three characters unless you get permission from me-
-Proper grammar and spelling is expected.
-Please don't pick fights with other writers in the storybook. If you have a problem, PM me and I will take care of it
-I also make the simple requests that you try to post a decent length post. (More than just one line), and put your characters name at the top of you posts.

I reserve the right to ask you to no longer participate in this storybook if you cannot follow these rules, or if you cause problems.

Also, I have not decided for certain on this yet, but I may be doing something similar to what Kitty15 is doing with her StoryBook, where I offer praise and prizes for good posts, and offer advice on posts that could be better.

Profile --

Should look like this --

Name:**
Age:**
Appearance:**
Personality:
Background:
Other:

Feel free to add anything else to your profile. The starred fields are the only fields that are absolutely required.

I shall create my character profile(s) at a later date.

Discussion Thread Is Here
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

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** Yay, the joys of basic teenage life. **

Name: Lucinda Blair

Age: 16

Appearance: She has mid-back black hair and royal blue eyes. Her lashes are very long. She's petite and pale. She has platinum chunks of color in her hair. She usually wears it in low/loose pig tails. She usually wears graphic tees (cupcakes, cartoon characters, stuff like that.) and skinny jeans.

Personality: She is crazy and fun. She likes to get into "sticky situations" a lot. She's pretty much you basic wild child. She like to rebel and protest. Loves parties! Up for anything that comes her way. She likes her oppinons to be heard.

Background: She lives with her mother and older brother. She visits her dad at his house once a week. Her partens divorced when she started high school. They just couldn't take each other anymore. She doesn't really have a solid relationship with either of them.

Other: Up for love.

** If you want me to make her brother a character I will.**
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Both of my people are up for love.

Name: Dusty Ryder

Age:16

Appearance:Her

Personality: She is a big tomboy. She always hangs out with guys, and she is really tough girl.

Background: SHe had never had a boyfriend, she thinks it's because guys find her intemidating or just as one of the other guys. She doesn't think she'll ever have a boyfriend, least not for a long time. She is basically the one that the guys go to when they need help with basically anything, which makes her all the sadder because they don't seem to like her like a girlfriend type.

Other: She is really sweet.




Name: Colt

Age:18

Appearance:Him

Personality: Protective, sweet.

Background: He moved to town when he was little, his best friend moved too (Dusty). Not much to tell.

Other: Dusty is his best friend and basically little sister.
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Name: Cara

Age: 17

Personality: She's sweet and kind. she's very na




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****I want Chris****
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Name: Alastair Blair

Age: 18

Appearance: Black hair that hangs down in his eyes which are a midnight blue. He is very tall and has toned arms and stomach. Pale but a little darker than his sister.

Personality: He's protective of his friends and sister. He'll always be there when you need him. He likes to party and have fun but he controls it unlike Lucinda.

Background: He lives with his mother and sister. He worries about Lucinda sometimes but knows she has to figure things out on her own. he doesn't go and visit their father like she does though. He despises him. Two of his good friends at school are Chis and Colt.

Other: He's had lots of girlfriends and they've fallen all over him. He was the "sweet guy" and he knew girls liked that. Up for love.
Last edited by Vampy_Girl15 on Wed May 14, 2008 9:54 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Some say laughing is the best medicine but what do you do when you can't laugh anymore?

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**May I claim Colt TN?**

Name: Tanner Thomas

Age: 16

Appearance: Her except she has blue eyes

Personality: She is extremely outgoing, not matter what her appearance looks like. She LOVES to meet new people.

Background: Her dad is a drug dealer and her family is rich. She was raped three years ago and died her platinum blonde hair to black with streaks, which she changes according to her inside mood that week

Other: Up for love and has a younger sister that follows in her footsteps. Her possy is the big news of the neighborhood.
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NAme: Raph

age: 15

gendeR: male

appearance: http://croaky.deviantart.com/art/Teenag ... to-2914039

history: He is an average boy. Tends to like partying and such. Loves food, and exsersize.

personality: He is hyper active, a real nice guy, and a funny guy.

other: He doesn't have any parents.
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Name: Aurther Dent
Age: 17
Appearance:He has messy black hair. Blue eyes. He is a bit scrawny but what can you expect of a writer
Personality: Kind and caring. Loyal and ambitios in thought, but shy when things start to fall into place.
Background: He is a britsh exchange student who's visa kinda ran out so he is in the country illeagally. His parents sent him during the war on terror knowing he would be safer over seas.
Other: He reads and writes a lot (like me) and he is sorta after Cara
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Name:Sybyla Jane

Age:17

Appearance:Sybyla

Personality: She's light and fun loving, but only to people who get along with her, she's the kinda girl who you'd expect to have had sex, but hasn't, and surprisingly nor has she had a boyfriend.

Other:She's seems likes she's got a sign around her neck that says "back off". She's imitating on the surface, but when you get underneath that you find that she's just a angry teenage emo girl who wants nothing more than a little bit of love and friendship.
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Name: Jessica 'Jess' Dyer

Age: 16

Appearance: A little above average height and very skinny (but still healthy). Thich red hair that reaches her elbows. Pale skin and green eyes. Has one hole in each each and one in her nose

Personality: Doesn't like to be fake, and will often tell you exactly what is on her mind, but she can be subtle depending on who you are. She acts nice around adults, but really can't stand it when they interfere. She's the ind of girl you don't want to mess with. Has a firey temper. Not a huge fan of shopping and 'girly' things. Has a job serving in a cafe.

Background: Raised in a large family in Melbourne but moved to America when she was 14 to live with her older brother. A black belt in Tae Kwon Do, but would never use her skills unless she's in a life-threatening situation.

Other:
*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*




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**This is a great way to start you guys! I'll give it the rest of tonight to gather people, and probably start the actual storybook tomorrow morning during second period.**

Name: Arabella Maria
Age: 16
Appearance: This is her. She's pretty bookish, obviously.
Background: She's lived alone for about a year now, since her mom ran off. Her dad's a billionaire, and sends her enough money to live off of every month. She doesn't advertise this fact though, so no one knows. She had a boyfriend who treated her pretty badly, and forced her to have sex once. Then she got the nerve to break up with him and he began spreading nasty rumers about her.
Other: She's got almost everything she wants in life. She's in advanced classes, and she's content with her lifestyle. What she really wants though, is someone who loves her.

Name: Elijah
Age: 17
Appearance: This is him. He's got this pretty look about him, almost feminine. He's the type of guy that almost every girl secretly loves
Background: Sadly, Elijah had sex fairly early in his life. His girlfriend, who he loved very passionately, talked him into it. He only regretted it a few months later, when she broke his heart to pieces. He would never pressure a girl into sex, but he does like it. (haha). He lives with his mum, who is a druggy and very rarely home.

**I'll probably post one or two more characters, but I don't know when my parents are getting home so I'll go ahead and post this first one**
Last edited by Bella on Wed May 14, 2008 11:17 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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(Can we start soonish pweaselease?!)
Last edited by Alice on Wed May 14, 2008 11:21 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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** Eek, I can't get on the computer at school tomorrow... **

Here's the picture of Lucinda and Alastair by the way. Although, Alastair doesn't spike his up and his hair is a bit shorter: http://photobucket.com/image/emo%20hair ... 1.jpg?o=92
Some say laughing is the best medicine but what do you do when you can't laugh anymore?

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Name: Vincent Wicker

Age: 17

Appearance: Very light, longish blonde hair and bright green eyes. Stands at about 6'1" and is well-built, but not particularly muscular.

Personality: Supremely confident and sure of his goals. He is difficult to impress and rather cynical.

Background: A bit of a womanizer. He stands apart from the popular jock role, but seeks his fair share of action--and gets it, usually. He plays basketball (shooting a deadly three ball) and plays the piano.
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