Young Writers Society


Teenagers

881 posts1 ... 50, 51, 52, 53, 54, 55, 56 ... 59
User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1844
Reviews 110
Colt:

"I know, I don't like it either." Colt sighed.

"They need to scan nurses better." Phil hissed. Senra sent a sharp look at him and then smiled at Annie.

"You'll be out of her in no time." She smiled. She looked at the blood bag that was slowly supplying her friend with blood. "Looks like your about out." As if on que a nurse walked in and switched the bags. "I probably should get busy." She said standing up.

*tears, me either*
"And you wonder why we don't like you!" -Trumpkin
.
.
Vist my world and make it bigger!
Want a Readers crit???




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1373
Reviews 270
Annie

The nurse shoved Sen back in her chair, "don't worry about it, we got the blood from the blood drive today. She'll be fine."

I sighed in relief.

Phil did too.

"I think Im gonna go get something to eat then," Sen said smiling. Phil got up and followed her.

I looked at Colt.

"Why didn't you tell me you were leaving?" he saked.
I just lost the game.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1844
Reviews 110
Colt:

"I don't know, cause I knew you'd follow." She shrugged.

"Annie, I just want to protect you." He said softly. "Do you not want htat?"


Senra:

Senra leaned against Phil and sighed. He was carrying Cale. "You know, I don't think I'll mind him growing up to seeing you as the main father figure in his life."
"And you wonder why we don't like you!" -Trumpkin
.
.
Vist my world and make it bigger!
Want a Readers crit???




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1373
Reviews 270
Annie

"I can protect myself."

He squeezed his hand, "I love you honey, but you can't. Look where you are."

I felt myself blushing and paling. "Yeah...I like to think I can though."

He turned my head around so he could kiss me, "if I stop being so protective will you stop being so reckless?"

"I think I can try."

"Good," he rumbled before he kissed me again. "And you'll stop working all those long hours?"

"I'm too tired to work all that much."

He kissed me again.

"I love you," I said before the medcine they put in my IV started to kick in and I drifted off to sleep.


Phil

My heart surged within my chest, "really?"

"Really really."

I tried to hide my over flowing joy, "good, I already started thinking of him like my son."

She giggled.

"Hey Sen," he said the idea striking him, "would you marry me?"
I just lost the game.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1844
Reviews 110
Senra:

"YES YES YES YES YES!" SEnra squealed. He laughed and pulled her in a hug. She took a deep breath and sighed. "Yes."

"You've said that." He chuckled.

"I know." She smiled at him then looked at Cale, "Your hte luckiest little boy ever."

Colt:

Colt took the chance to run to the local jewlers. He was going to wait until she was out of hte hospital, but he wanted to really be her fiancee. HE got back just before she woke up.

"Rested?" He smiled. SHe nodded yawning.

"How long was I out?"

"A few hours, not to long." He smiled.
"And you wonder why we don't like you!" -Trumpkin
.
.
Vist my world and make it bigger!
Want a Readers crit???




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1373
Reviews 270
Annie

I frowned, it felt like ten minutes. "Not that long." I insisted, "I'm still tired."

Colt kissed her forehead, "go back to sleep then."

I didn't really want to, but it sounded too tempting. Food sounded better though.

"I'm hungry."

Colt pulled a bag out from behind him, "I went and snagged you a cheeseburger."

She smiled, "I already love you you knwo that right?"

"Yeah...?"

"You don't have to keep wooing me."
I just lost the game.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1844
Reviews 110
Colt:

Colt smiled, "No, but I do need to take care of you or you'll never get out of here." He smiled.

"true." She laughed.

"I don't like this place." He sighed. The nurse came in and he looked up. "How much longer til she can leave?"

"A few hours as long as things go smoothly." The nurse replied checking gage after gage.

"Good." He sighed.
"And you wonder why we don't like you!" -Trumpkin
.
.
Vist my world and make it bigger!
Want a Readers crit???




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1373
Reviews 270
Annie

The nurse turned back to me, "how ya feeling sugar?"

I finished my bite of burger, "better."

She nodded, "good. After you eat get a few more hours rest and we'll be able to release you."

I smiled and ate another bite.
I just lost the game.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1844
Reviews 110
Colt:

Colt smiled, "I can't wait." He said laying his head on her bed.

"Have you slept?" She asked.

"No, I'm fine though." He yawned.

"Your not takng care of yourself, do I need to do that for you?"She laughed.

"Guess so." He replied smiling up at her.
"And you wonder why we don't like you!" -Trumpkin
.
.
Vist my world and make it bigger!
Want a Readers crit???




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1373
Reviews 270
Annie

I pulled myself to the far edge of my bed, "come nap with me."

"Are you sure?"

"Yes. Get your butt over here."

He didn't argue any further. He scooted over next to me on the bed, I closed my eyes and leaned against him, falling quickly asleep.
I just lost the game.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1844
Reviews 110
Colt:

Colt couldn't keep his eyes open for long. She was soon fast asleep his arms wrapped around her gently. His dreams were peaceful for the first time in a long time and he knew why.

Senra:

SEnra was excited, when they got to Annie's room she smiled laying her head on Phil's shoulder. Colt was asleep next to Annie. "Good, they are both getting some sleep."


*Sorry it's short*
"And you wonder why we don't like you!" -Trumpkin
.
.
Vist my world and make it bigger!
Want a Readers crit???




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1373
Reviews 270
Phil

"Speaking of sleep, you're in need of some too you know."

"We all do," she agreed. "But we've got no place to sleep."

"We'll get a hotel, leave your cell number for them just so they know to call us."
I just lost the game.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1844
Reviews 110
Senra:

Senra nodded and left her number then followed him out to the car. She held Cale until they got to a hotel and Phill booked a room. She was tired, more so then she would like to admit. She smiled at Phil when they went to teh room and she laid down her eyes driffting shut. They flew open as Cale woke up and started screaming.

"I'll feed him." Phil said, "Go to slee." He said firmly. She hesitated, but then nodded.
"And you wonder why we don't like you!" -Trumpkin
.
.
Vist my world and make it bigger!
Want a Readers crit???




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1373
Reviews 270
Phil

It was strange, this little boy wasn't even mine and I still loved him more than anything. I laid him back down on the little nest we made him on the couch and rejoined Senra on the bed.

She wasn't quite asleep, she rolled over and cuddled against me. "Let's set up a date."

"May twenty third," I said randomly wanting to sleep.

"good date."
I just lost the game.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1844
Reviews 110
Senra:

Senra woke up to Cale crying. She got up and looked at the clock, they had slept through the rest of the day, it was nine in the morning the next day. She picked up Cale and smiled. "First night sleepign all the way." She smiled at him yawning. She picked up a bottle and started feeding him.

"What time is it?" Phil asked grogerly.

"Nine am." She replied. He sat straight up.

"What!"

"We were tired." She grinned.

"He slept the whole night?" Phil yawned. She nodded smiling.
"And you wonder why we don't like you!" -Trumpkin
.
.
Vist my world and make it bigger!
Want a Readers crit???



Once you replace negative thoughts with positive ones, you'll start having positive results.
— Willie Nelson